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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 18th, '10, 23:18

Fa-Q wrote:simple rhyming simple diss...theres your feed


I was using multi's :S

Thanks for the feed anyway,
I don't diss much either lol
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 18th, '10, 23:22

Element. wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:simple rhyming simple diss...theres your feed


I was using multi's :S

Thanks for the feed anyway,
I don't diss much either lol

Dont diss unless youre good at it...and those werent multis....
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Jul 18th, '10, 23:24

Fa-Q wrote:
Element. wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:simple rhyming simple diss...theres your feed


I was using multi's :S

Thanks for the feed anyway,
I don't diss much either lol

Dont diss unless youre good at it...and those werent multis....


Some were
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 18th, '10, 23:24

Fa-Q wrote:
Element. wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:simple rhyming simple diss...theres your feed


I was using multi's :S

Thanks for the feed anyway,
I don't diss much either lol

Dont diss unless youre good at it...and those werent multis....


Im not gonna get better doin a diss if i dont diss now am i ?
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Jul 18th, '10, 23:25

Yes, if you just practice writing.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 18th, '10, 23:26

classthe_king wrote:Yes, if you just practice writing.


Ok fair enough i was bored only reason why i done this as well
but thats for the feed :y:
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Jul 18th, '10, 23:27

Element. wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Yes, if you just practice writing.


Ok fair enough i was bored only reason why i done this as well
but thats for the feed :y:


Like I said before, the biggest thing with a diss is wordplay.
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 18th, '10, 23:28

^

Yeah, thanks for the advice :y:
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 18th, '10, 23:31

quote="classthe_king"]
Fa-Q wrote:
Element. wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:simple rhyming simple diss...theres your feed


I was using multi's :S

Thanks for the feed anyway,
I don't diss much either lol

Dont diss unless youre good at it...and those werent multis....


Some were[/quote]
Two lines and they were simple as fuck....my multis that shit, shit better multis
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Jul 18th, '10, 23:32

Well multi is short for Multi-syllable rhymes, so technically they were all multis :whistle:
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Solace » Jul 19th, '10, 00:12

It was very weak multis so stfu everyone

bad diss but a lot better than Robot anyways
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby R.A.G.E In Darkness » Jul 19th, '10, 01:18

This is garbage.. :n:
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 19th, '10, 02:34

Nobody disses my homie. :angry:

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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Solace » Jul 19th, '10, 02:48

^ :laughing: :laughing:
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Robot » Jul 19th, '10, 05:45

gutawafang wrote:Nobody disses my homie. :angry:

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I never asked, cared, gave a fuck, or wanted opinions.
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