going through changes..another verse..fire.

[Boston]

ha.. well its for u 2 decide if its fire or not.. but i wrote another verse to going through changes.. all personal shit obv.. but yeah ima end up recording all this.. heres the verse

i just feel alone, all alone by myself/
smokin blunts n drinkin beer n poppin pills, a cry for help/
the problems in which i have dealt, a lot of em which i have felt/
the only way to solve em is to reach for things that hides in shelves/
oh there goes another blunt, no here comes another pill/
another night, another drunk just to keep me sane at will/
maybe its the pain that kills i just wana kill the pain/
i just went to jail and back and everything is still the same/
yup man my grandpa's gone, shealyn and my nana to/
i just have a thousand questions i dont have the answer to/
damn man i feel the worst but i just wana be the best/
i need success to make it through this broken heart n bleedin chest/
i swear to God im done wit this, the fuck wit this/
the loving switch to punch n kicks the fuckin wish ta fuckin quit n cuttin wrist/
theas no time for slowing down, pick it up i need to race/
just incase i have the chance of waking up to see her face/

and if u havent seen the first one i wrote


it seems like yesterday, stuck in a cell/
was it, the weed or me being stubborn as hell/
maybe, the trees n greed got me troubled as well/
comin from hell, clean n free n have someone to help/
and i know im not all alone, no/
anytime im feelin down i got my boys n girls to call their phone, so/
its never me alone even if its me at home/
i get the warm and comfort just to hear em through the speaker phone/
in a screamin tone sayin "why test ya luck"/
its a place you dont wana go i cant stress enough/
man depression sucks/
but i can make it through it i just know i can
to bad i had to learn my fuckin lesson cuffed/
when doors close another opens, its the way of life/
i got my dad n mother showin love to help make it right/
ive mistakened twice/
i know it damn sucks but ive learned to man up
n learned how to take advice/

feed please, then ill feed yall, leave a link or somethin, or jus feed because if u dont write shit haha

[Fa-Q]

1. Dont do Eminem Remixes
2. Dont say your verses are fire

[lil_bayly]

1. Dont do Eminem Remixes
2. Dont say your verses are fire

this

[gutawafang]

I like the first one you wrote. I dont like the second one due to beer and drugs references.

but flow wise its very good man, for both verses man. the one you wrote earlier is better, much better.

RF at my sig.

[Boston]

1. Dont do Eminem Remixes
2. Dont say your verses are fire

but they are ;] ;]

but thanks lol

[Boston]

and thank u guta!

[classthe_king]

1. Dont do Eminem Remixes
2. Dont say your verses are fire

Don't hate on Boston

[Boston]

^^ lol its all good bro i dont take it as hate. i was just fuckign around wit the fire thing anyways. but the dont do eminem remix's i laughed at.. he must of not peeped my audios before. this is the first eminem song i ever did to. but its all goood my dude!

[classthe_king]

lol @ calling yourself fire.

But yeah, it's not bad.

Just don't be cocky, especially on TR, unless you're one of the veteran writers from here.

He's been here since 2007, and he's not a veteran writer, he's a veteran rapper, if he wants to call it fire he can

[Boston]

lol dont worry geno, i was just joking around when i said that, im far from cocky if you get ta kno me n shit. i actually put work into writing/recording my shit. i usually dont stay in this section, im way more audio, but these are verses i all plan on recording and shit, but good looks on lookin out

[Boston]

^ no need 2 be sorry bro lol

[Solace]

Pretty good verse..I enjoyed it. If you ever get to recording this it would be a great track

[Boston]

^^ im def recording it , mark my words. just going to do a few more verses

[Boston]

yeah bro ^ good looks on the honesty my dude. i agree on the simple part, i mean i didnt wana be complex on a song like this, im jus trying to get more of a point across. thanks once again though. ill peep ya shit of course.

[Boston]

neone else?