Douche Bag - Verse

by **Xray** » Jul 19th, '10, 23:27

Haha dope verse. Entertaining concept as always. Keep em coming.

by **TheHundred$** » Jul 19th, '10, 23:42

Nice concept man, I liked it. ha ha

by **J Roc** » Jul 20th, '10, 00:13

Nice Shit Mazeen

by **gutawafang** » Jul 20th, '10, 02:50

nice multis.

by **Boston** » Jul 20th, '10, 17:27

well ill give this to ya, you always come up wit concepts not a lot of people think of, so thats ill and ur unique just for that alone haha. its a solid verse but for some reason i dont think some of the 'slant' rhymes be working but shit i wudnt know until i hear it, but either way its a good verse wit a story around it. gota drop more often

by **Boston** » Jul 20th, '10, 18:00

yeah i feel you wit that, im nto saying its not flowing or anything. some people get shit like that confused wen i write "oh idk if itll flow" mothafucka of course it will. and yaeh same thing wit slant rhymes wit me. they probably do rhyme perfect but gota hear em haha. n no doubt ill feed ya otha shit soon enough my dude, jus got back from occ so im just chillen a bit now. will peep soon

Website · by **Solace** » Jul 20th, '10, 21:41

Pretty great verse, I enjoyed the flow.

and only get on speaker just so everyone can see your phone,
I bet you're broke without a penny to spend but walk in to every store...

Those were pretty funny. :y: