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We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 19th, '10, 22:48

[Gutawafang]
I consult this fucking doctor, his name is Dope, he gave me some
It's worrisome, but then again, ya know why I fucking name it dumb
Cuz when I got it with me, I mean, my homie right beside me
It's like we're a duo ya see, no fucking way you can fight me
So why try, when you know it's a failure to even mention?
Our names when you diss randomly, enjoy the fucking tension
It's always Dope in my rap shit, born a blade to slaughter
With him, you don't sit back and relax and then wait for Guta
I'm made or rather, just another cat to be pounced on
Yo dogs, ya'll know my punches, they what you fucking count on
To wake you up, with fucking black eye like a panda bear
And scream as you beg us to give you back your underwear
Wait a minute, was it panties? Boys, you can take it back
Don't have to crawl under me guys, for the sake of sex
Touch up, cuz your makeup's been smudged, don't cry no more
Dope and Gutawafang, it's a mismatch you can't try to score


We ride by, two guns by-our-side
when we drive by, better run-in-side
cause lead will fly, and we are-so-high
we might just run up in your crib tonight.

We ride by, two guns by-our-side
when we drive by, better run-in-side
cause lead will fly, and we are-so-high
we might just run up on your cliq tonight.



[Dr. Dope]
The pills I prescribe give you a vibe thats hard to describe,
when Fish and me ride, we roll up the ganja inside n get high
The effects on your eyes are hard to hide, claiming their dried
Don't even try to lie, saying you cried or the lights too bright
Cause fuckin with us may end your life tonight, I brought the knife tonight
so don't even try to fight, stop kicking your legs unless you want pegs
We're smoking the chron you smoke regs, pull over at chevron and beat you like eggs.
And we'll keep beating you till one of you begs, for heavens sakes
The same heaven that brings you earthquakes and makes the ground shake
with sheer terror left in it's wake, oh shit looks like you made a mistake
you put your whole family at stake when your calling me fake
When I awake I wake n bake until my face aches, grab like 8 rakes
ride to your crib hit the disc brakes, break your ribs and make your jaw break.
We ride by like liquid cyanide, pry open your door and walk inside
You can run and hide, but this gun by my side, will open you wide
hogtied and wide eyed, simple as pi ,i'll sum this shit up and make you divide.

We ride by, two guns by-our-side
when we drive by, better run-in-side
cause lead will fly, and we are-so-high
we might just run up in your crib tonight.

We ride by, two guns by-our-side
when we drive by, better run-in-side
cause lead will fly, and we are-so-high
we might just run up on your cliq tonight.
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Re: We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 20th, '10, 05:49

Hey yo guys. :wave:
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Re: We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 21st, '10, 17:01

I guess everyone hated it Fish.. :(
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Re: We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 22nd, '10, 01:52

Dr. Dope wrote:I guess everyone hated it Fish.. :(

Word man. It's usually like this... :(
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Re: We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 22nd, '10, 10:21

I got myself a gun.
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Re: We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 23rd, '10, 18:47

Guys.. Some feedback Please.
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Re: We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby BILI » Jul 23rd, '10, 18:49

Its ok,Ive seen better drops from both of you.Both verses flowed good :y: Chorus is niceee :D
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Re: We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 27th, '10, 01:31

BILI wrote:Its ok,Ive seen better drops from both of you.Both verses flowed good :y: Chorus is niceee :D

Arigato Mr.Bili.
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Re: We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby Robbie G » Jul 27th, '10, 03:38

I haven't checked out that much from you guys but both of the verses were pretty decent. The biggest issue at least for me reading them was the flow. To me there are a lot of big lines that don't flow to great. But that's probably just me because I know you probably have it all in your had when you write it. Also I have a hard time believing you two are gangster and "ride by with two guns on your side" but it's all good haha :smoking:

Keep at it guys. :y:
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Re: We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 27th, '10, 04:30

Robbie G wrote:I haven't checked out that much from you guys but both of the verses were pretty decent. The biggest issue at least for me reading them was the flow. To me there are a lot of big lines that don't flow to great. But that's probably just me because I know you probably have it all in your had when you write it. Also I have a hard time believing you two are gangster and "ride by with two guns on your side" but it's all good haha :smoking:

Keep at it guys. :y:

:laughing: word man. i dig what u saying man. :laughing:

thanks for checking it out my man. :flower:
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Re: We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 27th, '10, 11:31

Yeah i dug both the verses, they were good. The flow is easily the best on this song. My favorite part was the chorus I could see it in my head lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 27th, '10, 15:27

Thanks for the feed everyone (Its about time)

And Yah thats a Dr. Dope Chorus of course :)
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Re: We Ride By (Gutawafang feat. Dr. Dope)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 28th, '10, 02:35

McMaybe wrote:Pretty nice stuff. Some good lines, and like said in this thread, the flow shines the brightest here. I love the hook haha, keep at it.

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