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You Must Be Dreamin (Hook + 2 Verses)

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You Must Be Dreamin (Hook + 2 Verses)

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 23rd, '10, 19:39

Taking the graveyard shift, Painted like Bravehearts wrist,
Ready to cave yall pissed ,i'm the one who gave yall this,
Yall fail to exist, hail to the fist, I will spray your bitch,
I hope you get the gist, You fit the desc-
ription, I cut light ,yeah I rip sun, fill your perscription,
with a hopeless addiction, you like the dick, yum,
I make your bitch cum, she said I fit n then some,
I spit shit like bum, This burning in your chest don't need tums,
You get hit n split with three guns, Then I "hit stick" with free thumbs,
Break bread down to wee crumbs, then take shots of the bottle of Seagrams,
Yall stuck at the bottom like sea scum, I'm Going full throttle like speed runs,
I'm shaking to jostle these de-mons, your being held hostage, want freedom?
These devils are filled up with greed, with negativity I feed them
They make me think that i need em, and then inside they breed sons
They told me they planted thier seeds once, Why do they come in a sequence?


[Hook]
NO REASON, For you to even be BREATHING
Fuck GRIEVING im glad that your LEAVING
FUCKING With me will LEAVE YOUR HEAD STEAMIN
Better than me? YOU MUST BE DREAMIN

NO TREASON, i'm after you as long as your BREATHIN
Fuck SCHEMING, I got a plan to BELIEVE IN
TUCKING the heat making sure that YOUR BELTS EVEN
Better than me? YOU MUST BE DREAMIN


I'm the sky high annihilator, So rough I defile haters,
hottest mc a mile of the equator, you can get it now or later,
I'm something like a sour flavor, You tree huggin flower saver,
ill be tucking power sprayers, in the streets fuckin cower neighbors.
Incredible Hulk, and when I transform I gain incredible bulk,
grab your head pull your brain right outta your skull, its in-evit-able
My cheddars so swoll, like a Confederate sol... never mind you read my mind,
Found the thoughts I was trying to find, I'm one of a kind, fine dine with fine wine,
then take the nine and blow ya spine right out of a line, Now your trying to rewind and align
your mothafuckin endocrine, fucking petty fine from an Endo crime,
it's a waste of time, the Grim Reaper is a friend of mine and will be
till the end of time, and every rhyme I construct is intertwined like twill seats
inside my mind, inside your blind, don't fall behind, or homie you will see
stay unconfined, or I will bring the heat, like Lebron turning cheeks
offer declined, as I recline, and consider to resign, I put the dueces up like a "V" sign
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I used to be able to spit
Now I can't even split my lips
to rip this spliff that I lit
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Re: You Must Be Dreamin (Hook + 2 Verses)

Postby BILI » Jul 26th, '10, 17:34

This one is dope.Hook is ok nothin special,1st verse was dope :y: ,I liked it more then 2nd which was also nice.Keep doin your thing homie.
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