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Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby classthe_king » May 18th, '10, 11:29

(Sentus)
You step on stage spittin that trash; don’t start me
I’ll bring the roof down and literally crash the party
I give faster heart beats, Sentus; the gut hacker
Dump your body in the sea till you a washed up rapper
You can’t handle the fury from which Sentus spawns
Forged from the deepest fires of Olympus Mons
My fist is strong, crush some and leave the rest shattered
A lyrical laestygonian spittin like a death adder
Throw my best at her, but you won’t be hearin this
They cover up my rhymes like the Cydonian pyramids
All the phonies be fearin this, I’ll roast the Carter
With the same bellicose rage as the ghost of Sparta
I’m supposed to slaughter, all the hate is embarrasin
You couldn’t keep up with my tracks if you were Native American
I’m so ahead of my time and it amazes you cause
I was spittin fire before Prometheus gave it to us

(Chorus)
What do you get with Anonymous Sentus
An entrance, to hell and your soul is ended
Legendary rappers, cracking backs and then spines
MAKE YOUR HOME UP IN SKIES LIKE IT'S BABYLON 5

(Mc Anonymous)
When the Legend has redemption to sew,
stepping with weapons and bones, dissecting any type of enemy home
Demons and memories, woah, souls
are splattered and null, rapping unfolds, magician lyrics are plastered and shown
Collateral damage exposed, gavel is thrown to podium,
judgment, shattering bones then numb with opium
Assassin; Legendary attacking, lyrically mastered,
beat is my slave like the Chinese to bastards
You wanna rap with, Anonymous, track god of this
obvious, lyrical obelisk? Words Absurd when I'm rocking this!
first person doubting it, thrown on bottoms of mountain cliffs
outmatched, like a Koala vs hippopotamus
Flow is so mysterious, like figuring periods
on a teenager, I don't even know when they're serious!
I'm a cremator, burning all your bones with a furious,
flame, weed lacer, smoking all the hoes in the game

(Chorus)
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby classthe_king » May 20th, '10, 11:45

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Re: Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby gutawafang » May 21st, '10, 07:49

Wow. I wonder why this shit ain't bumped man. It's indeed legendary. LOL.

Flow and multis. Period. :worship:
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Re: Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby Fa-Q » May 21st, '10, 08:42

No complaints with Class' verse...loved that Washed Up Rapper line lol and perfect structure

No complaints with Annon except that Koala vs. Hippo line....man dude that's a crazy simple punch...but its alright your verse was good to...

And the only overall complaint was the chorus, it just seemed like one of your lines in your verses except for the last one. Idk I just wasn't feeling it...but good collab yall
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Re: Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby Arabian Shady » May 23rd, '10, 11:19

Fa-Q wrote:No complaints with Class' verse...loved that Washed Up Rapper line lol and perfect structure

No complaints with Annon except that Koala vs. Hippo line....man dude that's a crazy simple punch...but its alright your verse was good to...

And the only overall complaint was the chorus, it just seemed like one of your lines in your verses except for the last one. Idk I just wasn't feeling it...but good collab yall


i was thinkin the same thing.

thats a pretty complex flow @ anon, good stuff B
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50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby classthe_king » May 24th, '10, 00:57

Thanks everyone :worship:
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Re: Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby classthe_king » Jun 1st, '10, 00:19

Fuck you guys, I'm bumping this again because it's that legendary
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Re: Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby Solace » Jun 8th, '10, 21:09

I’m supposed to slaughter, all the hate is embarrasin
You couldn’t keep up with my tracks if you were Native American
I’m so ahead of my time and it amazes you cause
I was spittin fire before Prometheus gave it to us


Demons and memories, woah, souls
are splattered and null, rapping unfolds, magician lyrics are plastered and shown
Collateral damage exposed, gavel is thrown to podium,
judgment, shattering bones then numb with opium
Assassin; Legendary attacking, lyrically mastered,
beat is my slave like the Chinese to bastards


Holy fuck hahaha those are pretty nice.

Man, both verses were great. Both of you started off ehh then you went full blast. Great written overall guys. 'Cept the koala line, really gay. Lol.
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Re: Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby classthe_king » Jul 24th, '10, 03:28

Thanks :shifty:
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Re: Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby Element. » Jul 24th, '10, 13:16

yeh i agree with Solance

both verse's are really good :y:
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Re: Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby Solace » Jul 24th, '10, 15:25

classthe_king wrote:Thanks :shifty:

:laughing: :laughing: Anytime. :shakehead:
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Re: Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 27th, '10, 11:40

Idk man CW is where the people sleep i guess lol sit was dope wasnt feelin the chorus much though. Class has a dope verse though, very well structured and flowed great, vocab was awesome too. Native punch was pretty cool I though, washed up rapper was cool too. Anon had a cool vrse too. that koala punch :zipped:
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Re: Mc Anonymous & Sentus- Legendary

Postby classthe_king » Jul 27th, '10, 23:16

Yah-hah wrote:Idk man CW is where the people sleep i guess lol sit was dope wasnt feelin the chorus much though. Class has a dope verse though, very well structured and flowed great, vocab was awesome too. Native punch was pretty cool I though, washed up rapper was cool too. Anon had a cool vrse too. that koala punch :zipped:


No hate on Native Americans lol, it was just cause they are good trackers ;)
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