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BILI ft. TJ-Crazyness

Postby BILI » Jul 26th, '10, 12:56

I`m back to writing :whistle: again,my new collab wit TJ,if some other people want to collab hit me back I`m down for anything,gotta get back. :y:
TJ:
I'm the best at this,dare to test me,prick?
You'll get shattered quick,layin' with splattered lips
And a savaged dick,where the faggots meet
You should better leave 'cause you don't want a battle kid
On the ave,I'm sick,like a fuckin' grandpa
Who touches and fucks,monkeys AND sluts
Trust me moron,
you should be "lucky" to beat me like a shamrock with four arms
Wack MCs form a straight line,
if you don't want these 8 9's emptied in your dad's spine
Call the Canine's,to fuckin' frisk me,
'cause I'm more dope than a ton of coke inside a biscuit
What can I say,I'm deranged
I guess that's why I crashed my new Range
And with that Rover,goes my whole life
I shouldn't have tucked a bazooka in my holster


BILI:
I`m real rebel,tornado,you`re real sa fights in damn movies
Nobody`s on my level,my penis snipes them pussies
Disater awaits to make you masturbate with a blade
Bite ya neck,you`re just a master bait that`ll fade
Call me great B-I to the L-I,see my jaw,jump aboard
Cant escape twice from my saw,FUCK the Ford
Its over,you fake,it`ll take you four years to awake,
but not with Drake,ya feel the floor?heres the quake
Bitch its a real life,no new starts,saves and loads
Real strife,you`ll survive if your true heart`s brave and it holds
Only happines,but aint no such thing,its crazyness
My pain cant be tamed,but its what made me best
Take my tears,inject them,its like a deadly virus lurks
This shit`s gonna grow on you like Miley Cyrus boobs
We do big jumps like Torrini,my man terminates juggernauts,
We rare like Dratini,my rhymes pund like heavyweight Jungle Drums

Everything in my verse connects,if someone finds it all I give him a cookie and huge hug :wub:
And prolly most of you dont get that great BILI thing,BILI on Croatian basically means white.

Now feed :angry:
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Re: BILI ft. TJ-Crazyness

Postby ThomasJ » Jul 26th, '10, 14:26

Comment motherfuckers.
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: BILI ft. TJ-Crazyness

Postby BILI » Jul 26th, '10, 15:29

No loveeeeeeee?
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Re: BILI ft. TJ-Crazyness

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 26th, '10, 17:21

I liked it guys good job.. And no one feeds man.. I have 2 projects in Creative Writing that has like 50 views and no replies... it sucks..

I think you should have made it a little more presentable, Capatalize what should be and also not have them in Quotes. After all YOU are the ones who said it so why would it need to be quoted.

I liked how you guys shared a similar style throughout.

Bili I Liked the "Snipe them pussies" line.
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Re: BILI ft. TJ-Crazyness

Postby BILI » Jul 26th, '10, 17:24

Dr. Dope wrote:I liked it guys good job.. And no one feeds man.. I have 2 projects in Creative Writing that has like 50 views and no replies... it sucks..

I think you should have made it a little more presentable, Capatalize what should be and also not have them in Quotes. After all YOU are the ones who said it so why would it need to be quoted.

I liked how you guys shared a similar style throughout.

Bili I Liked the "Snipe them pussies" line.

Thx man,appreciate it,I dont know why I quoted it tho :unsure: .

And yeah nobody feeds anymore :( ...link me your drop I`ll feed it
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Re: BILI ft. TJ-Crazyness

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 26th, '10, 17:26

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Re: BILI ft. TJ-Crazyness

Postby BILI » Jul 26th, '10, 20:40

Dr. Dope wrote:http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=93772

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=93761

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=93086

Done ;)
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Re: BILI ft. TJ-Crazyness

Postby ThomasJ » Jul 26th, '10, 21:57

Thanks Dr. Dope & Steve... Yeah,no pain,no gain! :D
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Re: BILI ft. TJ-Crazyness

Postby BILI » Jul 26th, '10, 22:36

Thank you Steven
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Re: BILI ft. TJ-Crazyness

Postby ThomasJ » Jul 26th, '10, 23:13

Bump.
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: BILI ft. TJ-Crazyness

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 27th, '10, 11:04

TJ-I actually liked yours. the multis were pretty good I thought. Just expand the vocab a bit but I thought it was a good verse. I liked it, it was entertaining and flowed well

Bili-I thought you could have done a bit better actually. Guess you just gotta get back in the rhythm. It flowed well and some punches were good. One ting I noticed was the last 4 lines didnt rhyme very well, but I always love a Pokemon reference lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: BILI ft. TJ-Crazyness

Postby BILI » Jul 27th, '10, 13:30

Thx for the feed
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