Look how far I can count

[Yah-hah]

I strain to shut off the world outside me,
But I can't cover my ears when my arms are tied behind me,
It's not likely that I'll ever be famous,
Hell I'm not sure I even know what fame is,
I'm not blameless but I do my best to cover my sins,
To cover them in the color of sin right under my skin,
My lovers, my friends how can I win this,
If I quit this as soon as I get this,
This script is forgotten, it wasn't written for me,
They said you can have the world and I took it literally,
So miserably I skimmed my fingers across these pages,
I grow impatient with my fist running across these faces,
I'm lost with patients with no patience from my own center,
My own liver shoved in this fine-stone blender,
I'm no winner with no angel wings to save me,
Only my baby to make me sain yet I'm crazy,
Amazing how quickly my words turn to a new subject,
Once again I'm left in such smooth unrest,

I just continue to type, let my fingers run freely,
Till my fingers linger and I run screaming,
Yet I'm the one reading the death of my own work,
My own hurt is what buries me in my own dirt,
Simple rhythm has soothed my flow,
Forgetting the words in the lyrics that I used to know,
I used to go but woah this whole world is gettin scary now,
My hands are trapped in the graves where I'm cemetary bound,
Stuck in this cemetery now rest my dome on this headstone,
When my heads blown, pull the trigger till the leads gone,
I'm headstrong but my legs are so weak,
When this fear strikes me from my head to my feet,
From my death till I'm seen as maybe not the greatest,
Cause I'm not famous,but as the Native who changed it,
From gang hits on racists when we blame this on the same chick,
My fames risked when they see wat my true face is,
My blade on your neck this is how you lose face kid,
My true race is RED in both senses,
Both witnessed the gross twisted hopelessness,
That flows in this rope's swiftness, my notes quickness,
My quotes gifted in the fact it was wrote senseless,
They are both witness to this bloodshed,
Native and Bloody thug said his blood's red,
So with this bandanna burned are all of my sins covered?
Or is my twin lover stuck in thunder of sins' mother,
This cover can only reach from my nose to my feet,
I'm five feet deep with only one foot to reach,
I'm the towns sacrifice and there about to get rid of me,
It's down to my kids and me, writing loud for the imagery,
Screaming my last words so that they're bound to remember me,
I'm the laughin stock till my casket drops, drowned in misery,
Close your eyes, hold your breathe, and count to infinity.

[Nick. Y]

I didn't understand a couple of lines, as if they were not in context, but apart from that, this was flawless and once again it proves your skill ! Keep up the good work homie,I wish you much success with your book

[Yah-hah]

Thanks for the feed bro

[Just Silver]

liked this piece a lot broski

"That flows in this rope's swiftness, my notes quickness,
My quotes gifted in the fact it was wrote senseless,"

feelin that line

and the ending was perfect overall 9.7/10

[Yah-hah]

Thanks Silver

[Element.]

I'm the laughin stock till my casket drops, drowned in misery,
Close your eyes, hold your breathe, and count to infinity.

I think this was all really good man, and the endin was awesome

[Yah-hah]

Thanks bro

[Arrinef]

"Cause I'm not famous,but as the Native who changed it,
From gang hits on racists when we blame this on the same chick"

damn, that shit goes hard

props man

[Yah-hah]

Thanks man I appreciate it, aint seen you around the CW much

[Terry_M]

Dope dope finish.

[Arrinef]

Thanks man I appreciate it, aint seen you around the CW much

word, i actually got alot of shit written, im just never on tr as much to post some shit on the cw


but im working on it man

[Yah-hah]

lol aight man again thanks for checkin. And I agree with you
Eli Porter >> Drake lmao

[Arrinef]

lol aight man again thanks for checkin. And I agree with you
Eli Porter >> Drake lmao

you know it

[BILI]

Yah man this was nice as usual,you became a dope writer,you always was a dope writer

[Yah-hah]

lol thanks bro