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My Dagger (Freestyle Verse)

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My Dagger (Freestyle Verse)

Postby Eminem_Recovery » Jul 24th, '10, 15:34

Bitch you better sort your attitude
You make me angry bitch and I'll be so mad at you
I'll grab a dagger and go up and hide in your attic fool
My dagger can do so many things, one would be to cut you up
Slice you until you're dead, that's one way to fuck you up
You thought this was gonna be an easy day but your luck blew up
I got a cold heart, my dagger is so sharp
When it's so dark, I'm more frightening than your loan shark
This ain't no teen thriller
Im just a dope mean killer
I'll chop you in half and leave blood laying on the floor
And the blood don't pour anymore
Don't test me bitch I'll fucking slaughter you
I swear to God I mean it, every single part of you
I'll rip out your insides, it's what I oughta do
I got some sick thoughts going through my braincells
Let me take my dagger and see if the blood stains well

What y'all think? :smoking:
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Now get off my dick/ dick's too short of a word for my dick/ get off my antidisestablishmentarinism you prick/ (Almost Famous)

Man get these wack cocksuckers off stage/ where the fuck is Kanye when you need him/ snatch the mic from him 'bitch I'ma let you finish in a minute',/ yeah the rap was tight but I'ma bout to spit the greatest of all time so you might wanna go back to the lab tonight/ (No Love)
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Re: My Dagger (Freestyle Verse)

Postby Slim Shady 313 » Jul 27th, '10, 18:01

Pretty good freestyle. You got some sick rhymes dude. Would like to see some more of your stuff.

Anybody else?
Soon as my flow starts/I compose art like the ghost of Mozart/
Even though they all say that they're real I know that most aren't

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Re: My Dagger (Freestyle Verse)

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 27th, '10, 18:16

This screams out Eminem.
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Re: My Dagger (Freestyle Verse)

Postby Eminem_Recovery » Jul 27th, '10, 18:46

Thanks all :smoking:
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Now get off my dick/ dick's too short of a word for my dick/ get off my antidisestablishmentarinism you prick/ (Almost Famous)

Man get these wack cocksuckers off stage/ where the fuck is Kanye when you need him/ snatch the mic from him 'bitch I'ma let you finish in a minute',/ yeah the rap was tight but I'ma bout to spit the greatest of all time so you might wanna go back to the lab tonight/ (No Love)
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