Prometheus

[Terry_M]

The starting and ending were both so dope.

[ThomasJ]

I liked this a lot. Keep it up

[Yah-hah]

I know this isnt the first hing I've read from you but Ididnt know wat to expect when I read it but it was really dope. I would have liked to see it longer (Thats wat she said) but the rhymes and vocab were excellent. Looking forward to reading more

[gutawafang]

Pretty cool rhyme pattern man.

I can visualize certain lines here. Creative man.

[BILI]

Its short but nice
I wrote my verse for our thing,I`ll send it to you when I come home

[Peace_Maker]

R.A. bitches haha.

I liked it, kind of a bit over the edge in some places though. Like the nano bot thingy lol. Keep it up though, your drops since this have improved.

[Arabian Shady]

A southpaw outlawed to the fiery pits of the earths core,
For, Waging wars on intelligent nanobot lifeforms,
And swarms of invisible flying cyborgs,
Lightning forms in the sky when i brain storm my rhymes,
Then each of my line unleashes a bolt at a time,
So far underground the devil gave me his soul jus to sign,
To his record label, See he knows im unstable with lyrics able
To send heaven crashing and have god cleaning my coffee table,
I could have anyone killed trust me i will see to this,
Im a Titan that will steal your fire like Prometheus

i digg this shyte mayne!!
good stuff