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Fa-Q - La Diablo Castiga feat. Yahhah and Gutawafang

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Fa-Q - La Diablo Castiga feat. Yahhah and Gutawafang

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 29th, '10, 05:50

(Yahhah)
So much shit on my mind time stops for a second,
Take a few more drinks to stop with the stressin,
Wat I thought was a blessin was a wolf in disguise,
Must have slipped off the silk sheets when they got pulled from behind,
No more cryin for now just fuck it tired of this blah blah shit,
Makin my baby momma sick, no longer are you yah-hah's chick,
Take these words and swallow it I'm sure it wouldn't be the first time,
And thats just one thought that I was stressin in the first line,
This pain it is the worst to find words plain up in a verse of mine,
Angel wings are breakin see you no longer even deserve to fly,
Now its 6 am and you here callin my phone to beg me,
Earlier you weren't sure bout it but now you seem so ready,
I'm tired of these awful things shut up bitch take off my ring,
I don't give a fuck wat you say 3 seconds I'm takin off ya see,
Oh sorry does that make you cry I think I see a tear or two,
Don't worry baby I wouldn't lie come closer I'm still here for you,
Haha yeah fuck that slut I'm playin the game you used to play,
Yeah thats right remember it's the one that I refused to play,

She punished me with a quick snap of her cattle whip,
She shot my high horse, and she sunk my battle ship,
My saddle slipped, she leveled my warship,
Now I’m in hell for a goddess, a devil I worshiped,

(Fa-Q)
I watch from hell, see she sent me there, but theres power locks,
Foggy windows, her dirt road gave me a pair of powdered shocks,
And I’m teased by the rest of these demons, each coward mocks,
The tears from the loneliness, soon leaves the gravel showered rocks,
The ghost of her apparition is chasing me, I hear loud rattling chains,
My clothes drenched, my fist closed, clinched, Ive been battling rains,
I was saddling reins, on my high horse, I try forced relationships,
But this felt so right, at the end, I show light, I saw two caucasian lips,
I would stare into her eyes, deeply, as if my eyes were mad at her eyes,
She wasn’t grouped with the rest of the world, she’s never categorized,
I was once spell bound, but it was diablo castigo’s coruscate hell’s found,
She’s la diablo castigo, but whats hidden inside is her long tail and horns,
She sent rain, sleet, and snow my way, now lonely I sail planned storms,
I am left bitterly chilled, but tell me why watch of my pail hand warms,
I thought it was silver and gold I found, but its not what I find in treasure,
She was a demon, a she-devil with a pitchfork, but she’s lined in pleasure,

She punished me with a quick snap of her cattle whip,
She shot my high horse, and she sunk my battle ship,
My saddle slipped, she leveled my warship,
Now I’m in hell for a goddess, a devil I worshiped,

(Gutawafang)
Took my sight, cut my veins, snapped my spine, she got them done
Took my pride, drowned in flames, hotter than the goddamn sun
Had it slipped, the chance to slip away from this eternal cage
Now even God wakes from His sleep, goes into infernal rage
No second chances, made mistakes, so I gotta face Nemesis
The point is, this is how it's made, I'm in race, let's finish this
Pour me again some boiling water, splash on me volcanic lava
I been through worse than this on Earth, so just let this manic suffer
Sharks with horns and butterflies with wings of an angelic demon
Took my sample, then she labeled them as some magic semen
Fucked unicorns, so what was born were mermaids with vagina
Then fucked them too, but goddammit, she fucking set a timer
I can't refuse, I can't escape, that's why it's diablo castigo
I'm facing this, even if we fucking bend as low as we go
Thunder-whips, she uses it to make me scream with every lash
And took my pride with rusty chainsaw, finally I'm turned to ash
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Re: Fa-Q - La Diablo Castiga feat. Yahhah and Gutawafang

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 29th, '10, 19:02

Wtf BUMP!!
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Re: Fa-Q - La Diablo Castiga feat. Yahhah and Gutawafang

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 29th, '10, 19:04

What.. no one is commenting because it all sucked dick....


HAHA just kidding guys, it was so dope you left people speechless.

Really every single one of you fit the theme and had a nice verse.

I liked Yah's the most, but the other 2 were very close behind.
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I used to be able to spit
Now I can't even split my lips
to rip this spliff that I lit
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Re: Fa-Q - La Diablo Castiga feat. Yahhah and Gutawafang

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 30th, '10, 00:09

thanks Dr. Dope
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Re: Fa-Q - La Diablo Castiga feat. Yahhah and Gutawafang

Postby gutawafang » Jul 30th, '10, 02:18

Dr. Dope wrote:What.. no one is commenting because it all sucked dick....


HAHA just kidding guys, it was so dope you left people speechless.

Really every single one of you fit the theme and had a nice verse.

I liked Yah's the most, but the other 2 were very close behind.

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Re: Fa-Q - La Diablo Castiga feat. Yahhah and Gutawafang

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 30th, '10, 05:21

We were all pretty even....good verses from er'yone
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Postby Fa-Q » Jul 30th, '10, 20:26

bump
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Postby Fa-Q » Aug 1st, '10, 00:21

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Re: Fa-Q - La Diablo Castiga feat. Yahhah and Gutawafang

Postby ThomasJ » Aug 1st, '10, 00:28

I liked all 3 verses,great job. :worship:
For some reason,the 2nd half of Yah's verse reminds me of Em's Superman LOL.
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: Fa-Q - La Diablo Castiga feat. Yahhah and Gutawafang

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 2nd, '10, 00:09

Thanks a lot Tj
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Re: Fa-Q - La Diablo Castiga feat. Yahhah and Gutawafang

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 2nd, '10, 02:29

Sleepin WTF thanks you too. Yeah Fa-Q's verse was dope already told him that. Was really suprised how good gutas was so props fish. Nukkas need to wake up
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - La Diablo Castiga feat. Yahhah and Gutawafang

Postby Just Silver » Aug 2nd, '10, 03:44

Multi piece and a half :y:

Everyones vocab was on point and brought stylized shine
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Postby Fa-Q » Aug 2nd, '10, 12:48

thanks silv
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Re: Fa-Q - La Diablo Castiga feat. Yahhah and Gutawafang

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 2nd, '10, 23:16

Thanks Alot Fran
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