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Things Just Aren't Fair (2 verses and a hook)

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Things Just Aren't Fair (2 verses and a hook)

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 30th, '10, 17:16

Sometimes things... they just aren't fair.
Imagining things... that just aren't there.
Pendulum swings... I just don't care..
Times passing.... I am not aware..

Sometimes I feel like i'm being pulled apart
from my head, arms, legs, and my foolish heart
Its like I need to be wound up, or pulled to start
Then I get found dumped in a pool of sharp
needles and objects, self conscious complex
as strong as I am...Flex, I seem to have digressed
back to how I was i'm just depressed, a mess
obsessed with how upset i get, I guess
How is it that i wake up every day
take up to ten pills every day, to say it's O.K.
trying to take my pain away, my brain is grey
but it's made it very clear that it's here to stay
and it's not even listening to what i'm here to say
I'm just sitting here praying it doesn't end this way
and that there is the light of day, to come and light the way
Cause i'm lost in the darkness, and pretty soon i'll start to fade away

Sometimes things... they just aren't fair.
Imagining things... that just aren't there.
Pendulum swings... I just don't care..
Times passing.... I am not aware..

I'm sick of this shit!, spit with such anger that i'm ripping my lips!
The top has been tipped! i've finally woken up and gotten a grip
I will no longer sit back and watch myself slip from my stance
I'm a motha fuckin man! I need no ones assistance
i'll do it on my own with courage and persistence!
How could I let myself fall, so damn far in the distance
It's like every time i'm running I just can't keep up
But i'm here to clean so i'm here to sweep up
all this shit I have been stuffin all up under the rug
sick of being looked at wrong and mean mugged
I'm tired of being dragged behind you could say i'm drugged
But i'm making myself clear now, i'll fly above!
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Re: Things Just Aren't Fair (2 verses and a hook)

Postby TheHundred$ » Aug 1st, '10, 22:39

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Re: Things Just Aren't Fair (2 verses and a hook)

Postby Tash8 » Aug 1st, '10, 22:40

Sometimes things...they just aren't fair.

what?
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Re: Things Just Aren't Fair (2 verses and a hook)

Postby TheHundred$ » Aug 1st, '10, 22:41

Tash8 wrote:Sometimes things...they just aren't fair.

what?


aren't.... A mix between Are and not.. Things they are not fair...
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Re: Things Just Aren't Fair (2 verses and a hook)

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 3rd, '10, 08:48

Wow man I'm upset this is gettin slept on bro you're a very underated writer. I saw it when we collabed you have alotof potential :y: I've done alot of pieces like this, kinda like just fuck the world kinds moods. I actually did a series called "Fuck the World pages 1-5" I wrote for like 3 hours non stop and dropped everything I had over 5 songs I'll try to find the link. I'm at that point in my life rigt now and this song really hits home with me. Great talent ma I really do hope you continue to write and improve your craft. Much respect homie. Keep that head up
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Things Just Aren't Fair (2 verses and a hook)

Postby Tash8 » Aug 3rd, '10, 09:35

Dr. Dope wrote:
Tash8 wrote:Sometimes things...they just aren't fair.

what?


aren't.... A mix between Are and not.. Things they are not fair...


no i get that

but who the fuck says that?

things they are just not fair, but i guess so it flows...coo then
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Re: Things Just Aren't Fair (2 verses and a hook)

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 3rd, '10, 11:15

Yeah I actually dig the chorus too
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Things Just Aren't Fair (2 verses and a hook)

Postby TheHundred$ » Aug 3rd, '10, 17:21

Yah-hah wrote:Wow man I'm upset this is gettin slept on bro you're a very underated writer. I saw it when we collabed you have alotof potential :y: I've done alot of pieces like this, kinda like just fuck the world kinds moods. I actually did a series called "Fuck the World pages 1-5" I wrote for like 3 hours non stop and dropped everything I had over 5 songs I'll try to find the link. I'm at that point in my life rigt now and this song really hits home with me. Great talent ma I really do hope you continue to write and improve your craft. Much respect homie. Keep that head up


Thanks man, i really appreciate it.

I still feel like I am not doing the best that I can, sometimes you just gotta be in one of those moods for it all to truly come out.
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