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We Got the Last Laugh (Micheal Jackson Diss) Steeeevveen!!!

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We Got the Last Laugh (Micheal Jackson Diss) Steeeevveen!!!

Postby J Roc » Jul 31st, '10, 12:13

THE CRACKHEAD HIMSELF!!! :
With Help From Steven & Drugss, Were Leavin Him Sonned,
Well, After Jesus Is Done Cuz Heaven Doesn't Let In Freaks Who Beats Up Their Sons
Just Cuz u Named Ur Kid After a Blanket Doesnt Mean u Can Treat Him Like One!!!
Just Know That Im Great, You Aint Real I bet Even Ur Shoulders Are Fake
When i Fall Apart, I Mean I Feeel Hopeless Today
When You Fall Apart, We Mean Your Nose And Your Face
Ur a Human Skelator I Still Dun Think Ur Pulllin Ur Weight
Whut u Needed Was An All-Sexy Bitch... Before u Died Did u Call Any Kids?
My Guns-are-Shy So "Fuck-a-9!".. but You Already Did!
Your 50 And Need a Tan, Ur Widow Was All a Part Of My Evil Plans
I Used to Leave Her Gasped Then Eat Her Vag' While Smoking Weeed By Grams
While You Were Pretending Your 5 And Dressing Up Like Peter Pan
Are Your Some Kinda Pedo?? I Get bitches pusssy After i Dial "Helllo?"
But Ur Just Glad 10 year Olds Started Owning Private Celllphones
Ur On a Crash Course ... Im 'busting'.. Is This Rap Porn That I Asked For?
I know how u OD'd without an atopsy, cause You Look Like a CrackWhore

Who's Bad Now You SonUvaBitch :smoking:

STEVEN WONDER :
Culkin, hiding hunched up in the corner sulkin,
Michael's puppetshow just came to an abrupt end,
He grabs him by the hair suspends him up in the air,
Sticks his dick up in his ass he starts screaming AAAHHHH
Jacko muzzles his voice, tells him in a soothing voice,
'dont you worry son, Pretend its Home Alone, And the burglars won'
Many years on, macaulay knows hes in the ground, Its still caution to the wind,
Cause his farts dont make a sound, his ghost still roams his house,
Seekin revenge cause his doctor killed him,
I say that shits wrong, Hes just hunting for his children,
In the winter months used to put a Blanket on his cock,
The eiffel tower is in Paris and the Prince's castle got rocked
Didnt need a mask on halloween but dressed up anyway
cause he a freak with his kids and loved the roleplay,
He used to make them watch each other, He stood em all in line,
So fuck that pedophille butthole, you can ban me for this rhyme,
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Re: We Got the Last Laugh (Micheal Jackson Diss) Steeeevveen!!!

Postby ThomasJ » Jul 31st, '10, 12:16

Completely unnecessary.

LOL JK Dope. :laughing:
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Re: We Got the Last Laugh (Micheal Jackson Diss) Steeeevveen!!!

Postby J Roc » Jul 31st, '10, 12:29

Thanks Holmes ^^^^^^^


J Must Be On Crack If He's Acccttualllyyy Wasting His Talent On Disssing Micheal Jackson.

Anybody getting in on part 2? :shifty:
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Re: We Got the Last Laugh (Micheal Jackson Diss) Steeeevveen!!!

Postby ThomasJ » Jul 31st, '10, 12:35

J CrackRockz wrote:Thanks Holmes ^^^^^^^


J Must Be On Crack If He's Acccttualllyyy Wasting His Talent On Disssing Micheal Jackson.

Anybody getting in on part 2? :shifty:

Sure,but let's diss someone who's still alive,ok? LOL
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Re: We Got the Last Laugh (Micheal Jackson Diss) Steeeevveen!!!

Postby BILI » Jul 31st, '10, 12:39

:laughing: That was the shit,in a funny way :y:
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Re: We Got the Last Laugh (Micheal Jackson Diss) Steeeevveen!!!

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 31st, '10, 18:31

Lol @ you guys pulling a written 187 on a dead guy
disrespectful but dope
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Re: We Got the Last Laugh (Micheal Jackson Diss) Steeeevveen!!!

Postby J Roc » Aug 1st, '10, 01:48

Lol Thanks 4 Peeeping & Feeding yall
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Re: We Got the Last Laugh (Micheal Jackson Diss) Steeeevveen!!!

Postby J Roc » Aug 1st, '10, 05:52

SiiNiDE wrote:Almost as good as when I used to text. Not bad, could use a lot better metas / wordplay.


Hah Thats Cooool bro .... i just Keystyle'd after staying up until 8AM baked for no damn reason lol ... i just felt like crakcing a bunch of jokes that came to mind until steven said he was done his verse lol

Peep suma my other shit i got somewhat decent punchlines, wordplays and meta's ... Ifff ur into that sorta thang

Thanks For a Feed & Read :y:
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Re: We Got the Last Laugh (Micheal Jackson Diss) Steeeevveen!!!

Postby J Roc » Aug 1st, '10, 06:54

hah i started here for aboutt a month, Then moved to a big battle site.

Turning audio sooon as i can figure out how ..... i got a mic & lyrics ... just no way to record lol.
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Re: We Got the Last Laugh (Micheal Jackson Diss) Steeeevveen!!!

Postby Solace » Aug 3rd, '10, 05:41

DƎRDYPK wrote:Lol @ you guys pulling a written 187 on a dead guy
disrespectful but dope

This
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