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Raw Taylor

Postby Just Silver » Aug 2nd, '10, 02:51

Expect a damn warning im in red alert
Signing different shirts autograph at the work
Try to be me but people trying to be that
A sequel of me supersized into a g pass
Known to the expiration date of a ski mask
Im calling and you better beep back
Cease that, relapse so much i had 3 laps
Im in marathon mode I will just eat tracks
Im a flow with no sailor as the crowd goes I rep Taylor
I deliver with the best mailers and check test failures
Bong hits from strong piff im on it
No sonnets hope the song flips
So high there is no beneath sitting on clouds of keif
I hope Khalif would be proud of me
Chew off bars, spit far and down the beat
Per cuss im on, every perc-uss-ion
So my verbs bust on, as the dirt rubs raw
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Re: Raw Taylor

Postby tjb » Aug 2nd, '10, 03:09

veryy dope. really flowed well too. :happy:
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Re: Raw Taylor

Postby Just Silver » Aug 2nd, '10, 03:10

tjb wrote:veryy dope. really flowed well too. :happy:

thanks guy :y:
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Re: Raw Taylor

Postby gutawafang » Aug 2nd, '10, 03:25

Looks simple to me. multis are pretty good though.

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Re: Raw Taylor

Postby Just Silver » Aug 2nd, '10, 03:29

gutawafang wrote:Looks simple to me. multis are pretty good though.

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Looking back it was a little simple but thats my new style for the most part
try to combine lots of strings
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Re: Raw Taylor

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 2nd, '10, 03:36

damn Silv, can definately see an improvement of flow...I would work on vocab next. Good drop
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Re: Raw Taylor

Postby Just Silver » Aug 2nd, '10, 03:39

Fa-Q wrote:damn Silv, can definately see an improvement of flow...I would work on vocab next. Good drop

definite i was just feelin sort lazy with the vocab
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