I liked the whole piece really no complaints"Concrete"
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Re: "Concrete"
by Yah-hah » Aug 2nd, '10, 02:54
I couldnt get your flow till a few bars into it but I re-read it and its flows good. I know you do audio, havent ever heard any from you I'm sure it would help me get your flow. Should put a link so I can hear it. But the vocab and rhyming was great I liked the whole piece really no complaints
I liked the whole piece really no complaints
"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah
Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol
Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: "Concrete"
by tjb » Aug 2nd, '10, 03:07
hard to flow but i really liked
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the emcee is me, the host for the night
papa doc, only thing i dont choke on the mic - redman
LISTEN UP: http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10104374
lets get this track to number 1!
LIKE IT: http://www.facebook.com/pages/TJB/19056 ... 663?ref=ts
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Re: "Concrete"
by Steve Spag » Aug 2nd, '10, 03:54
Great piece man, really enjoyed it!
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