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Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby Tash8 » Aug 2nd, '10, 04:41

impossible will be the first single of my upcoming tape, I really like this song--I'm recording it in a studio tmw and i might post it soon..anyways I produce the beat on this and I cant wait for ya'll to hear it, but for now here's my two verses for it

now First thing I wanna say is that you sicken me
and I dont really give a fuck what you think of me
at least not anymore cause I'm slipping free,
I'm alone my own and I'm living me
I'm falling from the sky or so it seems like, I feel like
there ain't a parachute to let loose I'm in free flight
The best view I never really thought I'd ever reach heights
like these I wish we'd rewrite these times
so I can finally-sleep right these nights
but it's time that you leave and I write these rhymes
as i'm thinking in my mind like why would I rewind?
when I'm this close to find a way to leave you behind
you took me so high but it wasn't worth the fall
worst of all, it was love- the worst curse of all
and I actually loved you it's why it hurts to fall
and at first it was (impossible)


I ain't looking for redemption or vengeance
revenage of any sort, I won't resort though I'm tempted
expect nothing more, cause I've learned how to accept it
and now, I guess we're left with (nada) whatever happens next is
is out of my control but I'm not really resenting
I waited, debated, whether to embrace it
saw it heading bad but I didn't wanna face it
TIME, I done wasted
WHY? I got complacent
but I'M not complaining I'M just saying
it's draining my energy, psychically and mentally
these words that I blab are my artillery and weaponry
the only stabs I have and the rest I kept to me
In a constant contest, a struggle over nonsense
which I just can't conquest or find myself a locksmith
who'd unlock this cockpit that you will find me locked in
and I really don't like it, why else would I stop then?
but I don't wanna stop there's gotta be a better option
It's crazy, no I guess it's (impossible)
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Re: Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby ChronicJon » Aug 2nd, '10, 04:51

I liked it man it's dope. Multis are there and I digg the last lines :y:

Looking forward to hearing it. By the way how much does it cost for a studio session over there?
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Re: Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby Tash8 » Aug 2nd, '10, 06:27

ChronicJon wrote:I liked it man it's dope. Multis are there and I digg the last lines :y:

Looking forward to hearing it. By the way how much does it cost for a studio session over there?


thx man, well I was gonna go pay 35 for a studio, but i just talked my dude KDE he said i can come over a drop a track..
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Re: Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby ChronicJon » Aug 2nd, '10, 06:33

Tash8 wrote:
ChronicJon wrote:I liked it man it's dope. Multis are there and I digg the last lines :y:

Looking forward to hearing it. By the way how much does it cost for a studio session over there?


thx man, well I was gonna go pay 35 for a studio, but i just talked my dude KDE he said i can come over a drop a track..

Damn, if I only I could find a studio for 35 :(

Anyways you're only gonna make 1 track that session?
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Re: Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby Tash8 » Aug 2nd, '10, 06:46

ChronicJon wrote:
Tash8 wrote:
ChronicJon wrote:I liked it man it's dope. Multis are there and I digg the last lines :y:

Looking forward to hearing it. By the way how much does it cost for a studio session over there?


thx man, well I was gonna go pay 35 for a studio, but i just talked my dude KDE he said i can come over a drop a track..

Damn, if I only I could find a studio for 35 :(

Anyways you're only gonna make 1 track that session?


we'll see :sweating:
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Re: Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 2nd, '10, 10:44

Yeah man definitely one of the better peices of yours. Topic was relatable and very well stated. Rhymes and vocab were on point for sure man. Can't wait to hear it in audio :y:
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Re: Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Aug 2nd, '10, 10:47

im digging the multies in this bitch
and it flows nicely :smoking:
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Re: Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 2nd, '10, 21:55

i enjoyed rapping this, very good concept,one thing to look at would be the same words you used, maybe you can find a better way to say certain parts. overall not a bad single! :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby Robbie G » Aug 3rd, '10, 00:09

Can't wait to hear this recorded. :b:
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Re: Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 3rd, '10, 00:25

Finally a tape :D
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Re: Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby Tash8 » Aug 3rd, '10, 04:32

thx guys. I wasn't able to get this recorded. finished two other songs though
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Re: Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby Solace » Aug 6th, '10, 14:53

^S'all good. Pretty solid piece and good luck with the tape. So the beat you wrote this to already had a chorus or something?
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Re: Impossible (First Single coming soon)

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 6th, '10, 15:09

I think everybody is underplaying this. That was fucking epic.
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