Fingertips are my ventilation systsem

[Yah-hah]

I dont think I'm really ready to start writing let me crack my knuckles,
Can't shake past my trouble it only comes back in doubles,
I've laughed so subtle but once they strapped the muzzle I lost half the muscle,
Looking past the struggle, on my toes toppling over the wounderous clouded pyramids,
Every syllable carries 100 pounds of tears in it, bruised hands I clear em with,
"Same story" by Vinnie Paz echoes around my empty mind,
My neck could barely support the weight before I straight emptied mine,
Written this same song like 59 or 60 times,
Tired of seeing all these empty lies and wimpy tries through my shifty eyes,
'Take your heart back give me mine' I've said this so many times,
So many lines I've written and erased, written with no place,
My God is given to me with no face so I'm just sittin below space,
My body and my mind grow weaker by the minute,
Through the speakers that I get it to the creature that has sent it,
Man forget it now I'm just tryin to write some foolish shit,
No emotional multies, I'm emotionally lonely, I can't do this shit,
Wait a second who is this? writing my own thoughts of uselessness,
Just the venting I'm sending to empty the mind of a stupid kid,

Like this shit doesnt make me happy or any less agrressive,
Just gives me all my evil thoughts so I can repress them,
The canister that contains my bottled thoughts is about to explode,
Standind on this broken chair with a barbwire noose around my throat,
Look out world I'm bout to go, Heaven or hell I dont know better yet I dont care,
I know either place I get thrown I'm going no where, so I'm thinkin they're both scared,
Wait kid don't go there you dont wanna piss either one of those guys off,
Well I'm past the point of waiting for either one of those guys to die off,
So I figure I'll have to meet them both sooner or later,
Or at least until someone disproves theres a savior,
Pushing my pen so hard that I'm bruising the paper,
Like I'm losing the flavor so some salt in my wounds would just be doing a favor

[ThomasJ]

Goddamn Yah! Basically,this was amazing!

[Yah-hah]

Ha thanks bro

[Yah-hah]

Just been in one of thosemoods ya know

[Yah-hah]

Sleepin

[Yah-hah]

Appreciate it homie

[gutawafang]

holy motherfucking multis

[Enimee]

my man this is hot forr sure

[Yah-hah]

Appreciate the love

[Yah-hah]

lol not very many people feed these days lol appreciate the response tho everyone

[Peace_Maker]

Written this same song like 59 or 60 times

I've felt like that before ^

Great piece. Nice story. I don't know what to say really. You've mastered multis though, you should start doing crazy stuff with your schemes.

[Yah-hah]

lol at Maybe I dont think I've seenit if so my bad. And to peace maker thanks bro. Wat do you mean by crazy stuff?

[mcZu]

The usual Yah piece, good lyrics, good story and you stay true to yourself. Keep it up. I would say try to grow in a different way, try some new things with your work.

[Yah-hah]

Yeah I have been workin on buildin my craft some more, I jus wrote this when I was upset one day lol Good look Zu