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10 Bars, Punchline Practice.

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Re: 10 Bars, Punchline Practice.

Postby ThomasJ » Aug 3rd, '10, 22:54

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It's cool. :y:
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Re: 10 Bars, Punchline Practice.

Postby ChronicJon » Aug 3rd, '10, 23:04

lmao at the down syndrome punch :laughing:

I enjoyed it, it was a nice punchline verse.
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Re: 10 Bars, Punchline Practice.

Postby classthe_king » Aug 3rd, '10, 23:14

Ƨteven© wrote:you couldnt kill the mic if you shot derdyPK.


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You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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