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A Quick One (I'm Still Alive and Writing?)

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A Quick One (I'm Still Alive and Writing?)

Postby Solace » Aug 2nd, '10, 06:27

Ain't no stopping the sound, you'll get shot with a round,
You get got with that golden wristwatch walking around,
And to the haters on my list, I just keep crossing them out,
It's bitch stalking so I dunno what this shit talking's about,
I taste achievement, in this rap vault I stay locking it down,
Make believing? Haters speaking like I'm the talk of the town,
They're tossed to the ground, I feel like I'm wasting my mind,
Over making these lines, just for me to be tasting some shine,
Creating these rhymes, I end up laughing as I sever your bluff,
Y'all better give up, because against me you're never enough,
I'll never slip up, but all this hate I have to stomach is cruel,
Though it's worth it since I wouldn't be here if it wasn't for you.
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Re: A Quick One (I'm Still Alive and Writing?)

Postby Solace » Aug 3rd, '10, 22:31

Lick nuts.
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Re: A Quick One (I'm Still Alive and Writing?)

Postby ThomasJ » Aug 3rd, '10, 22:35

What to say... Dope flow,dope multies,dope verse. :y:

My favorite lines :

Ain't no stopping the sound, you'll get shot with a round,
You get got with that golden wristwatch walking around,
And to the haters on my list, I just keep crossing them out,
It's bitch stalking so I dunno what this shit talking's about,
I taste achievement, in this rap vault I stay locking it down,
Make believing? Haters speaking like I'm the talk of the town,
They're tossed to the ground, I feel like I'm wasting my mind,
Over making these lines, just for me to be tasting some shine,
Creating these rhymes, I end up laughing as I sever your bluff,
Y'all better give up, because against me you're never enough,
I'll never slip up, but all this hate I have to stomach is cruel,
Though it's worth it since I wouldn't be here if it wasn't for you.
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: A Quick One (I'm Still Alive and Writing?)

Postby Solace » Aug 3rd, '10, 22:41

Thanks man :y:
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Re: A Quick One (I'm Still Alive and Writing?)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 3rd, '10, 22:42

Wow this is the first time ive got on the creative writing forum but damb Solace your a dog at rapping. Im going to be going through and finding some more stuff from you. The flow was insane.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: A Quick One (I'm Still Alive and Writing?)

Postby Solace » Aug 3rd, '10, 22:44

:laughing:
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Re: A Quick One (I'm Still Alive and Writing?)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 3rd, '10, 22:47

Your only 14 :o . Thats really good. Im only 15 and ive been writing a couple songs to for like the past 2 or 3 months.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: A Quick One (I'm Still Alive and Writing?)

Postby Solace » Aug 3rd, '10, 22:53

You made a funny. :wub:
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Re: A Quick One (I'm Still Alive and Writing?)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 3rd, '10, 23:15

Remember when you used to be better then me :shifty:
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Re: A Quick One (I'm Still Alive and Writing?)

Postby Solace » Aug 3rd, '10, 23:22

Yeah :(
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Re: A Quick One (I'm Still Alive and Writing?)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 3rd, '10, 23:28

I used your songs as guidance my first couple months of writing if that makes you feel any better
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