I'm skeetin hard in your whip, my peter parked in your bitch
My teeth are sharpened to rip, flesh apart when I spit
Slashing targets to bits, last samurai in this bitch
Please try to convince, these people that I am the shit
Your style's shit, so bull I could grab it by the horns
Don't keep rapping, commit suicide, don't try to conform
Evil children thrive in the corn, with knives and their swords
Reaping lives for their lord, look at the grime and the gore
Elevate. (DOWN THE LINE)
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Elevate. (DOWN THE LINE)
by Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 01:51
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Re: Elevate.
by classthe_king » Aug 4th, '10, 02:32
You are repeating useless rhymes, try to say something. Elevate.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Elevate.
by Solace » Aug 4th, '10, 03:13
The only decent thing out of this was Your style's shit, so bull I could grab it by the horns. It could've been executed better though. Peace. Elevate.
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Re: Elevate.
by Yah-hah » Aug 4th, '10, 03:36
Yeah man I mean great rhymes and all put no meaning. Potential though multies were nice but they get boring if nothing new happens ya know. Keep it up 
"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol
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Re: Elevate.
by Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 03:46
The point of the title is to practice, I like criticism.
Would anyone like to battle/collab?
Would anyone like to battle/collab?
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