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P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 06:45

Can we act R-AGE, light rays to the Darkness
Your sister's suicide, let's display it, no conscious
Was it by gun, splattered brains on the carpet?
Did she die hung, left to swing till she parted?
Did the knife gleam? Wrists bleed, never clotted?
Or did she pop E? and OD'd? how retarded
Next target..................dude listen
Ya daddy's unemployed, AKA a musician
Welfare recipient, minority statistic
The electric bill was priority, no Christmas
Shit bitch...your mother's a must have
Bet she walked out, must a never comeback
Truth is I don't know, bet her skin was rough, cracked
So daddy had to drink sat mugs on her hunched back
Fuck it, enough chat, keep my name up out your raps
Public Service Announcement...time we faced facts
Your brain is child's play to manipulate.
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 07:41

Thanks man, check out "The End Days #1" if you have time.
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby J Roc » Aug 4th, '10, 08:14

Peace_Maker wrote:Can we act R-AGE, light rays to the Darkness
Your sister's suicide, let's display it, no conscious
Was it by gun, splattered brains on the carpet?
Did she die hung, left to swing till she parted?
Did the knife gleam? Wrists bleed, never clotted?
Or did she pop E? and OD'd? how retarded
Next target..................dude listen
Ya daddy's unemployed, AKA a musician
Welfare recipient, minority statistic
The electric bill was priority, no Christmas
Shit bitch...your mother's a must have
Bet she walked out, must a never comeback
Truth is I don't know, bet her skin was rough, cracked
So daddy had to drink sat mugs on her hunched back
Fuck it, enough chat, keep my name up out your raps
Public Service Announcement...time we faced facts


OMG!

Can we act R-AGE?? Lmaoo

NICE !
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 08:16

As you can see the diss wasn't focused on punchlines or wordplay. The first line was so everyone would know who it was directed at. I take more personal approaches with my work.

"I'd rather come up here and say suck my testicles,
than participate in a gun rhyme punchline festival"
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby J Roc » Aug 4th, '10, 08:20

You do your thang i'll do mines
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 08:22

J CrackRockz wrote:You do your thang i'll do mines

You do your thing, I'll do mine.
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby J Roc » Aug 4th, '10, 08:24

Peace_Maker wrote:
J CrackRockz wrote:You do your thang i'll do mines

You do your thing, I'll do mine.


Whatever dudee smoke pot
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby ThomasJ » Aug 4th, '10, 11:21

J CrackRockz wrote:
Peace_Maker wrote:
J CrackRockz wrote:You do your thang i'll do mines

You do your thing, I'll do mine.


Whatever dudee smoke pot

OWN. :laughing:

BTW,It was a cool diss. :y:
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby Solace » Aug 4th, '10, 13:22

So a member has been here for a day and somehow knows everything about MC Anonymous' life. Yeah, obviously not an old member that got banned or something.
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 22:11

Who's MC Anonymous? It says in the first line who I'm dissing. You mean Anonymous1?
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby Solace » Aug 4th, '10, 22:32

Yeah you're funny.
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 4th, '10, 22:56

Wait so an old memeber on a new account is dissing another old member on a new account :-k
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby Solace » Aug 5th, '10, 02:16

Pretty much.
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Aug 5th, '10, 02:26

Peace_Maker wrote:Who's MC Anonymous? It says in the first line who I'm dissing. You mean Anonymous1?

Come on Spyder. Let's battle again. :y:
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Re: P.S.A. (Diss)

Postby Solace » Aug 5th, '10, 03:06

gutawafang wrote:
Peace_Maker wrote:Who's MC Anonymous? It says in the first line who I'm dissing. You mean Anonymous1?

Come on Spyder. Let's battle again. :y:

It's not Spyder. :smoking:
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