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Man Or Myth

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 23:13

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E9IfQLYaOCY

They say he had three heads, with three eyes a piece
He had claws, a forked tongue, and steel knives as teeth
Ate rhymes, had feasts on the insides of beats
Megaladon jaws ensured he'd climb to elite
In some's mind a freak, in some's mind a myth
An outer shell, of dragon scales...his hide was thick
He liked to spit...it often calmed his nerves
But his saliva was napalm so it often burned
A God perturbed, sent thunderbolts to open his flesh
Hadn't understood it'd only fuel the bolts in his neck
The volts were sent via the wires up in his veins
To the center of his chest where his heart still remained
Pumping the flames, fueling the fire up in his eyes
He spit lines of pure light and he lit the sky
He never died, he waits to feast again
On the day I uncage this crazed beast with in
Your brain is child's play to manipulate.
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Re: Man Or Myth

Postby classthe_king » Aug 4th, '10, 23:16

You sure write alot
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Man Or Myth

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 23:18

I've wrote everything I've posted on the spot, grab a beat and go. I'm bored.
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Re: Man Or Myth

Postby classthe_king » Aug 4th, '10, 23:20

How long did it take you to write this
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Man Or Myth

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 23:20

I think I replayed the instrumental like 5 times.
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Re: Man Or Myth

Postby classthe_king » Aug 4th, '10, 23:23

So like 15 minutes, that's pretty impressive if its legit.
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Re: Man Or Myth

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 23:25

It's legit. I've spent hours on an 8 line poem before. No reason to lie if you like your end product.
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Re: Man Or Myth

Postby classthe_king » Aug 4th, '10, 23:28

That's more like I am, it takes me hours to write verses, but you probably already know that don't you :shifty:
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Re: Man Or Myth

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 23:29

classthe_king wrote:That's more like I am, it takes me hours to write verses, but you probably already know that don't you :shifty:

No.
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