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Re: Im Not A Pedo, So Fuck Doing 16's

Postby Tash8 » Aug 4th, '10, 18:28

yes cause going younger would excuse you from being a pedo. :facepalm
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Re: Im Not A Pedo, So Fuck Doing 16's

Postby ThomasJ » Aug 4th, '10, 18:29

Damn,that shit was classic. :worship:

Ƨteven© wrote:You couldnt 'come hard' if Medusa gave you head whilst you wrote bars,


:laughing:

Ƨteven© wrote:You bring more shame on your family than Laurence Fishburne's daughter.


WIN.
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: Im Not A Pedo, So Fuck Doing 16's

Postby BILI » Aug 5th, '10, 12:16

This great man :y: .There are some dope punclines.Rhyming was on point too.Only thing I didnt like was the flow
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Re: Im Not A Pedo, So Fuck Doing 16's

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 5th, '10, 12:35

Yeah the flow was awkward. Medusa line was dpe. Wat did Fishbournes daughter do?
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Im Not A Pedo, So Fuck Doing 16's

Postby ThomasJ » Aug 5th, '10, 12:41

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah the flow was awkward. Medusa line was dpe. Wat did Fishbournes daughter do?

Porn.
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Re: Im Not A Pedo, So Fuck Doing 16's

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 5th, '10, 12:43

:laughing: wow Morpheus bout to kick someones ass
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Im Not A Pedo, So Fuck Doing 16's

Postby Solace » Aug 5th, '10, 16:39

Meh. Barely an average piece, nothing impressive. Retarded flow. Medusa punchline is so overused. And

Tash8 wrote:yes cause going younger would excuse you from being a pedo. :facepalm



He sort of got you there.
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