What am I gonna do?

[mcZu]

Inspired by D.Dubs (Emadyville). He hooked me up with the beat (including the hook), so all probs go to him on the beat. I really want to record this one, so I'm gonna try to do so. Even if my mic is still shitty as hell. For now, it's just one verse. I might add another one if I feel like it. Feed will be appreciated.

[Verse]
Still just friends, Tamara, no end, sayonara
Six months apart is by far a...
...sick bond that is held by deception
Planting ideas in your head, inception
Certain ways of perception, covered under sections
So by thorough inspection and a Zoro direction
I’m heading to a tornado...
Being pulled in slow, attraction’s traction
It’s like torture... God... it’s...
Like falling in love with a goddess
She’s right there... in front of you
But you can’t touch her, she’s like a nun to you
It’s like love’s embodiment is numb to you
Stuck in this love... song... too
My heart is having swift beats, I need the keys
To her heart, so please, tell... me...

[Hook - sang] [2X]
What am I gonna do?
I can’t get through to you
You look right through me
You just can’t see me
What am I gonna do?

[Peace_Maker]

NEVER DO A DRAKE LINE. EWWWWW.

Other than that I liked it, some things were phrased akwardly but I guess it just added to your style. Keep it up.

[mcZu]

Hmm.. This seems simple, yet pretty effective. My only problem is I can't stand when people do similies like the inception line you dide. It seems everyone is doing that lately. IDK, it's jst irritating to me. It will be cool to see this recorded.

Thanks for the feed, appreciate it.

NEVER DO A DRAKE LINE. EWWWWW.

Other than that I liked it, some things were phrased akwardly but I guess it just added to your style. Keep it up.

A Drake line? Thanks for the feed anyway, appreciate it.

[Peace_Maker]

Planting ideas in your head...Inception

you know, like Drake and Minaj do

It's going down...basement

[mcZu]

Oh, I see what you mean. It isn't exactly the same, but OK. Btw, that's called a punchline flow. It's been used for ages now in rap, Drake and Nicki aren't the first to use it.