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The Struggle (Weird flow, awesome)

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Re: The Struggle (Weird flow, awesome)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 6th, '10, 03:06

I love this. I remember you spittin' some of that to me on the phone the other day and it just totally wreaks of awesomeness!
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Re: The Struggle (Weird flow, awesome)

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 6th, '10, 03:40

Steve Spag wrote:I love this. I remember you spittin' some of that to me on the phone the other day and it just totally wreaks of awesomeness!


You guys talk on the phone? ...wtf

That whole thing was just perfect. Please post the beat.
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Re: The Struggle (Weird flow, awesome)

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 6th, '10, 06:01

Yeah I liked the flow. I enjoy rappin over orchestral beats. I want to hear the beat for this one. Was dope Maybe :y: Enjoy the first lines too was a good opener. Would like to see it expanded maybe into a song or something :D
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