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Re: About Her Eyes

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 6th, '10, 06:33

Can I hear some recent work from you guys?
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Re: About Her Eyes

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 6th, '10, 06:41

It doesn't have to be collabs or anything. The soundclick I found for SiiNiDE was old and you don't seem to have any recent stuff on youtube unless you're still a teen.
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Re: About Her Eyes

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 6th, '10, 06:44

Thanks man. I'm sure I'll be impressed.
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Re: About Her Eyes

Postby Robbie G » Aug 6th, '10, 13:27

That was dope, I'm a sucker for love songs these days. :sweating:

I'm looking forward to hearing the tape from you guys. :y:
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Re: About Her Eyes

Postby Solace » Aug 6th, '10, 14:43

Robbie G wrote:That was dope, I'm a sucker for love songs these days. :sweating:

Exactly that. Good job Maybe. :y:
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Re: About Her Eyes

Postby mcZu » Aug 6th, '10, 18:02

I like it. Word positioning is on point, and the usage of your vocabulary is pretty good. Depends on the beat if the flow is as good as it seems to be. Because you can't figure out someones flow without the beat in question.
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