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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby BILI » Aug 6th, '10, 20:36

SiiNiDE wrote:
BILI wrote:^^lmfao

PS:Your recordings suck man,your written stuff can pass,emotions and stuff,it can pass.But damn you voice is even more annoying then you :facepalm
At least I wouldnt sound like emo Lil Wayne


LMAO. You've never recorded ONE track yet you're talking shit?? You're a 15 year old text artist talking shit to someone league ahead of u. I rock shows, what do yo do? Honestly? You sit and type up texting bullshit that nobody cares about. Have you ever had a fan come up to you and say your text is great and your show was amazing? Didn't think so. Keep trying, you failure.

Lmao@ you thinking I want to be some low life rapper that can only bring 20 people to their show.I do this for fun,obviously you`re the one who takes it too serious and you fail at it.Do you earn alot of money from it?I doubt it,my father used to give me more money a day then you get a month,fact.And lol@ you thinking that I`m 15,I already told you that I`m older then you.Now prove me that you rock shows?And if you have a fan(one of course),I feel sorry for him,its even worst then Wayne fans,well your voice is at least the same
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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby classthe_king » Aug 6th, '10, 20:43

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classthe_king wrote:Dude just fucking accept that you aren't the god of music and other people can think what they want. You started writing in '08 and you think you're some veteran rapper? GTFO. Everyone can think what they want about music, I love multis and think that they do MAKE EVERYTHING BETTER. If you aren't using multis then your just lazy, fuck outta here with your "it hinders the flow". I listen to Atmosphere and Slug makes good music but Diabolic > Atmosphere any day of the week.



You just opened your sniveling little cock sucker about something you have NO IDEA about. I've been writing since 08? No, fucktard, I've been writing poetry my whole life. And I've been writing rap/hip hop since 2005. I had an account on here in summer 2006 and changed accounts in 2008 because I wanted a different name. Good job at failing being a presumptuous, try-hard failure.


SiiNiDE wrote:Get past it, elevate. I was doing that in 2008 WHEN I FIRST STARTED.


You lose.
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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby BILI » Aug 6th, '10, 20:47

:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

Niqqa you buthurt?You try really hard to earn some money and you just cant,damn I`m actually starting to feel bad for you,thats prolly why you do all these deep songs,you wanna cwy baby?And lol at you thinking that I actually want to be a rapper,if you`re despeate about it,it doesnt mean everyone is.And lol at you thinking I`m poor.I have more money now then you`ll earn ever in your life,and I didnt even had to break a sweat for it,proof?Ask anyone
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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby classthe_king » Aug 6th, '10, 20:51

You can call me whatever you want but I have tons of people telling me I'm dope even you're hero Mc Maybe so think about that one. And I don't want to get banned again so I'm out :coffee:



P.S I lol @ you telling me to step up my hip hop knowledge, I do listen to Atmosphere and Diabolic > Slug.
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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby BILI » Aug 6th, '10, 20:52

RA>Atmosphere

And RA,Atmosphere,AOTP are my 3 fav groups
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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby BILI » Aug 6th, '10, 20:56

What dignity would I have to lose?Yes I never worked hard in my life,my dad gave me tons of money and I dont give a fuck.At least I can wear different cloths every day :flower:

SIINIDE rocking a show:
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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby UzaKING » Aug 6th, '10, 20:59

Lol SiiNiDE why are you so full of yourself?
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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby BILI » Aug 6th, '10, 21:00

SiiNiDE wrote:
BILI wrote:What dignity would I have to lose?Yes I never worked hard in my life,my dad gave me tons of money and I dont give a fuck.At least I can wear different cloths every day :flower:

SIINIDE rocking a show:
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Maybe you should spend some of daddy's money on English lessons? Just a thought.

Continue to be irrelevant to everyone.

:laughing: :laughing:
At least I know few different languages,maybe not perfect,but what language you know?

Maybe you should make your voice evolve?I`m actually laughed so hard to that song my lil brother got scared.I love the way you say cwy :laughing: :laughing:
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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 6th, '10, 21:03

why do ALL of you always go to the same place. its not about who's right or who is wrong on their statements. I read the whole 3 pages of this thing and it gets me angry to see how pathethic this is.

first mczu and Sii... both of you were correct on what youre saying at first, its about complexity as well as it is about diferent tastes as well as it is about sending a message, yes, all that needs to be in a song, but this is not the first time I see this dumb fights, and its all about being contrary to the other person, about not coming down to an agreement and always trying to get some more out, so you run out of ideas and start bringing underground artists into the conversation and turn the original topic of discusion into which rapper is better. :shakehead: ... and, I'm sorry to say to many of you here, I like ya'll, and I'm cool with you and I dont mean disrespect but suddenly all of you come out of nowhere and jump against Sii in a pack like preeschool kids and then start just dissing eachother for the sake of it. calling each names and shit, you realize how stupid it is?, and then Sii again with the "ask mc maybe" shit... who gives a fuck of what mc maybe thinks of us. and its also pathethic to pull out the "I'm doing shows and nobody else"... well, I've done a fucking lot of live stuff too, but have you ever seen me post in here all my fortunes and shit... I even said no to a deal offer bcuz I recognized I wasn't ready... other dudes do well too, Bar is signed and doing shows, Steve Spag does too, many of us. but All of you just try to proove to eachother whos better, and who's worst, and who has a life... a forum means nothing, of course everybody has a life, some of us have university, I know you do at least school, and go out on weekends n shit... But worst off all, you all keep demotivating eachother instead of doing the exact opposite and tryng to look for the good of the other person, by helping, motivating, getting contacts out and shit, thats just an example. but man...

instead of tryng to make the other person look pathethic, all of you just down grade yourselves instead of tryng to have a mature conversation about the art of hip hop. This is exactly why rappers like Soulja Boy are out there. beacuse the real talent is here, in the underground. the only problem is that nobody helps eachother out and instead of being mature about it. you go and just call "bitch" each other.
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btw. I liked the verse a lot.
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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby classthe_king » Aug 6th, '10, 21:07

Look dude, obviously we have different goals. You just told me I'm not going in anywhere just like my hero Diabolic? I would LOVE to reach the level Diabolic has reached. Are you kidding? He gets to great albums on a record label, he gets to make music with Vinnie Paz, Immortal Technique, Canibus, Ill Bill, Rhyme Asylum, ect. That would be perfect for me. I don't know what your goals are but if you want to get even more famous you better get out of the style you're at right now and better get into some dancing shit.
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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby BILI » Aug 6th, '10, 21:15

SiiNiDE wrote: I rock shows

Videos/pics or gtfo

I played soccer game in front of 20 000 people.Top that bitch
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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 6th, '10, 23:38

:facepalm why is everyone trippin its a fuckin forum not everyones gonna be "rockin shows" and not everyone i gonna have a mic, but all the people droppin in CW for the most part arent terrible. May not be the best but they aint the worst. lol guessin yu missed bullet boy :whistle: and :facepalm :facepalm at you thinkin BILI was 15 year old broke kid haha. Bro honestly you need to chill with the whole I'm the best one here bullshit. Bar is signed Spag may as well be. You're def not he only one doin shows and puttin out music. So chill out take your critisism and compliments like a man and work on your craft. Wish you the best in yur career :y: Just stay humble brother dont let yourself get to big headed
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Re: "Walk Away"

Postby mcZu » Aug 7th, '10, 00:23

SiiNiDE wrote:
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SiiNiDE wrote:
Eminem isn't a very good example of that. He was a battler/punchline rapper before he got famous. (Infinite is filled with punchlines). It may have come off like I was saying that's the be-all-end-all, but that wasn't my intention. My intention is to show the growth and versatility. Basically what you just said. I used slug as an example because of how his music has changed over the years. There are plenty of artists that could be used as an example. (Diabolic is not one of them, lol.) I'm just trying to show these fools that forcing multies into a song does not make it better. Especially when you could have used that space to say something with more meaning.

If you were refering to me, try and reread what I wrote. I never said forcing multies makes anything better, if you can use a multie while filling that space up with something that is meaningful, then you can call yourself a good writer. If you just refuse to use a multie because you are too afraid that it'll sound forced, then you're just being lazy. Because trying to use multies that don't sound forced and yet keeping the meaning in that line is what a lot of writers try to achieve, 'cause that is part of the epitome of expressing yourself. So please, don't call me a fool. I mean, if you can't discuss something without using insults then don't discuss anything at all. That kind of speech only derogates the adultness of a conversation.

That is, if you were refering to me.


No, our conversation was fine. I was more referring to the class kid.

As for afraid to sound forced? Nah. Your misinterpreted what I said. I said I can't stand forced multies, not that I "don't se them becase I'm afraid to sound forced". My multies are never forced. That was my primary arguement: People over-using mlties. I just find it very amateur and annoying when people make their "mltie syllable rhymes" the focus of their works. I've been there. I've done the same thing in the past.

Chip on my shoulder / simpleton motives / sober. All perfectly acceptable multies that flow together (Just an example) I can't really think of anything forced or cliche at the moment, but I'm sure you know what I mean. Or, if not, you can just peep class the king's work.


Ok, I guess we agree in some way or another. I agree on the fact that forced multies don't sound good. Now, I don't agree that Class The King's work is filled with forced multies. But I'll keep myself out of whatever problem you guys have with each other, lol.
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