Blinded

[Robbie G]

Haven't written in awhile but here's a verse about a girl...

yeah, blinded,that's what i'm callin' it
so much money wasted, taking you to the mall and shit
but titties had me blinded, the right path I couldn't find it
but now I got my freedom and suddenly i'm reminded
how good life can be, when I don't have you suffocating me
now i'm livin' stress-free, but oh do I miss how you caressed me
and suddenly the emotion spills back in
memories pile onto my back until it starts crackin'
and I ask, baby why did this happen?
cuz there was no slappin, or hitting
did I start slacking? is there something i'm missing?
cuz to me we were the definition of perfection
and it's my intuition that we still have a connection
that goes way beyond sexin, so baby just let me in...

[classthe_king]

I thought this was good, great flow and great topic. I feel you man

[mcZu]

Nice multies and you managed to bring your emotion across in a good manner. Try to expand your vocabulary a lil, though. And you should definitely write more, you're good at it. Why waste a talent?

[Solace]

You're better than you were before. Great piece bro, I really liked it and knowing you never write that much made it so much better.