Rhyme Book

[mcZu]

Impressive one liners, bars and couplets. You should definitely use some of those in your writings, if you find the appropriate spot in a verse of course. I wouldn't advice forcing lines in a verse, you could build verses around some lines, though.

pain of having nuthin but everything to give

Best line out of them all, in my opinion. That line captures a vivid image of sorrow coated with such simple, yet effective wordplay. Impressive.

[Peace_Maker]

pain of having nuthin but everything to give

friends tell me "dude, you gotta' laugh more"...
it's hard to laugh when all you got's a noose without a platform,

Seriously awesome lines. I thought it was all usable material. Make sure you incorporate at least these lines that I quoted. Keep it up.

[Xray]

When I drop without a mic in my hand...
my shit gets slept on like a flight to Japan...

That's sick.

[Yah-hah]

Yeah man I do this same thing. I write notes and one liners in my phone all day then write em all down at the end of the day. I usually can make a whole song just based on one or two of the lines I've kept. In fact most of my songs are the result of me writing on line then just keep runnin with it.

I feel like walking alone...
home? I'm living between a rock and stone
stoned

[Ka0t1c]

i enjoy reading your creativity