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Sidewalk Conversations

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Re: Sidewalk Conversations

Postby mcZu » Aug 7th, '10, 00:59

I like the concept. You've managed to convey a message while keeping that concept relevant through out your piece. Nice.
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Re: Sidewalk Conversations

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 7th, '10, 02:52

Great story line and you used it as a medium to convey your thoughts. The flow was smooth and it all rolled off the tongue like poetry. Better than Walk Away, keep it up.
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