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Geno - Empty Field (story telling SSLPish style verse)

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Re: Empty Field (story telling SSLPish style verse)

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 7th, '10, 03:05

You're the main reason why it sucks to be a white rapper.
Your brain is child's play to manipulate.
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Re: Empty Field (story telling SSLPish style verse)

Postby tjb » Aug 7th, '10, 04:05

i dont think color really matters anymore in the rap game except for the fags on youtube who r like lil wayne is better then this white guy.. and so on. ^

anyways nice piece. didnt know you could carry out that rhyme that long.. only think i woulda improved is to make a transition to another a little faster.
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