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Postby classthe_king » Aug 7th, '10, 01:53

You post more then I do
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Top Creative Writers - Color Vote!

Postby mcZu » Aug 7th, '10, 01:55

I used to. Not anymore. That's gonna change, though. I'm gonna post more often from now on.
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Re: Top Creative Writer WINNERS ANNOUNCED!

Postby Xray » Aug 7th, '10, 05:36

Congrats to Yah, Fa-Q and Class.

You guys put in a lot of work, great job.

This thread just inspired me. :b:
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Postby Solace » Aug 7th, '10, 06:21

Haha grats guys
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Re: Top Creative Writers - Color Vote!

Postby Xray » Aug 7th, '10, 07:07

Yah-hah wrote:Love how I'm out of the conversation becasue no ones ever heard me on a mic. Been called one of the best by the best. Just because I dont live in mommy and daddys house and pay for my own shit so I dont have tie for a mic makes me less than Derdy or sentus or anon. I giive every mc credit or their style, but I never say anyone is better or worse because of thier style is different. I enjoy punches but I dont use them often. So naturally I follow a more diabolic style. But I dontsee how I've become less of an artist by not being heard on a mic. I've gained respect by droppin constant quality shit, not 100 almost average 16s and freeverses. I didnt come on saying I was the best and better than everyone else I got respect from the best writers by writing with he best. I've beefed with the best and held my own (Anon and Sajjad) IDK wat this Siinide dudes problem is but you dont have to be the best or always right. You have your opinion fine but dont push that on everyone. I guess what I'm saying is no one is going to give you the credit you may deserve if your being an asshole to everyone and coming on claimin no one her is better than you. You're dope but in no way head and shoulder above people like me Fa-Q sentus an Derdy. My 2 cents

Yah-Hah please dude it isn't that hard. I realllly wanna hear how you sound. Get a cheap mic, 10-20 bucks. Hit me up on msn and I'll hook you up with a program and teach you how to mix, get your audio game up and running. Your rhymes got really nice flow to it so I can tell you can flow to beats. Just need to take that next stop now, better than later. Stop putting your skills to waste. A rapper needs to showcase his abilities on track, motherfucker do it.
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Postby Yah-hah » Aug 7th, '10, 07:10

Lol I know bro I have ZERO money fo even that. Fa-Q gave me his mic (idk where it went) but a pip burst in my house and ate all my money up. I'm thinkin less than a month I'll have a good mic to use though. I'll pm you and you can help me get my shit together. lol Yeah I want peole to hear me so they can get my flow down better :y:
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Top Creative Writer WINNERS ANNOUNCED!

Postby BILI » Aug 7th, '10, 07:49

Congratz to Yah,Class and Fa-Q,you guys deserved it :y:
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Re: Top Creative Writers - Color Vote!

Postby Xray » Aug 7th, '10, 08:24

SiiNiDE wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:Yo Si, your rhymes are more simple than Amish people's lifestyles so shut the fuck up



You only rhyme when the snare hits. LOL. Wait, NVM.. You can't even flow to a beat.

I'm the best.


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Lol dude.

I got no problems with you, but damn dude you keep letting your ego slip, in nearly every post of yours. I've never seen you post in this forum and not get into an arguement with someone. You always feel the need to let everyone know you're the best. I mean come on, we got tracks for that.

All this back and fourth hate is only growing you people into dicks... Even if you're father was Nas and your uncle was Rakim, you still shouldn't brag that much. It's childish and sad.

Yah-hah wrote:Lol I know bro I have ZERO money fo even that. Fa-Q gave me his mic (idk where it went) but a pip burst in my house and ate all my money up. I'm thinkin less than a month I'll have a good mic to use though. I'll pm you and you can help me get my shit together. lol Yeah I want peole to hear me so they can get my flow down better :y:

Damn. Yeah it's a challenge getting that first mic for a lot of people. Was a piece of cake for me, cause I'm that rich. Nah I'm broke as fuck, and was even more broke back then. Get into whatever local music store, and tax that shit my man. :y:

I'm down for that too. Whenever you get your gear, let me know bro. :smoking:
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Re: Top Creative Writer WINNERS ANNOUNCED!

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 7th, '10, 08:42

For the guy dissing 16's and freeverses. NOBODY WANTS TO READ A FULL FUCKING SONG. That's for audio. Sure you can write the song but just drop 1 verse, that's how you get fed. Diabolic style because you can't do punches? Diabolic has some of the sickest punches ever.

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Rappers swearin they on top! (Nuh uh, uh uh)
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Scheme scheme, plot plot (say WHAT?)
I'm comin for that number one spot! (Woo, hey)
Keep it goin it won't stop! (What you doin man?)
I'm comin for that number one spot!
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Postby Yah-hah » Aug 7th, '10, 09:28

:facepalm2 Haha not wat I meant at all homie lol I aint dissin 16s and frees but to be respected ya gotta have more than just a little peice. You have like 9 16s at any given time. People dont wanna see a million peices at once dude. I said diabolic style because of the multis not lack of punches lol I prolly said that tho I'm a bit faded
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Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Top Creative Writer WINNERS ANNOUNCED!

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 7th, '10, 09:35

Yah-hah wrote::facepalm2 Haha not wat I meant at all homie lol I aint dissin 16s and frees but to be respected ya gotta have more than just a little peice. You have like 9 16s at any given time. People dont wanna see a million peices at once dude. I said diabolic style because of the multis not lack of punches lol I prolly said that tho I'm a bit faded


I don't complain about feed like you do. I do it for enjoyment not for praise or critique. Given those things would be nice but I'm not going to slow down my writing process if no one appreciates it in the first place.

Anyone who gives the excuse of being drunk or high has already lost the argument.
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Re: Top Creative Writer WINNERS ANNOUNCED!

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 7th, '10, 09:40

:facepalm These people get dumber and dumber
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Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Top Creative Writer WINNERS ANNOUNCED!

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 7th, '10, 09:42

At least defend your point of view. A smiley is not a cop out.
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Re: Top Creative Writer WINNERS ANNOUNCED!

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 7th, '10, 09:48

haha dude how do I complain about feed? I dont need to I write good shit. I feel the need to write meaningful things not just a thousand freeverses and shit. Never said it was a terrible thing. if you're doin it fro the enjoyment you shouldnt be trippin
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Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 7th, '10, 09:49

:facepalm These people get dumber and dumber
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