My 5 minute verse...
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Re: My 5 minute verse...
by mcZu » Aug 16th, '10, 05:29
Definitely something that could be turned into a great song if more effort were to be put in to it. Had some really strong lines, and I enjoyed reading it. Exceptional work for a 5 min session. Keep up the good work.
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Re: My 5 minute verse...
by ThomasJ » Aug 16th, '10, 20:05
Nice.
But I don't see the point in 'speed' writing.
But I don't see the point in 'speed' writing.
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