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Re: Geno - Play With My Heart

Postby SajN » Aug 16th, '10, 19:07

Well, I am not really good to give detailed feedback.

I liked it. Third verse reminded me of Spacebound, but I still liked it. Haha, the last line was pretty nice :p

The rhymes are cool, nothing really big though. Some places I didn't feel the way you went over to a new rhyme/multi.


But nice song overall, like it.
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Re: Geno - Play With My Heart

Postby Sam. » Aug 16th, '10, 19:17

i liked the hook too sajn. :smoking:
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Re: Geno - Play With My Heart

Postby SajN » Aug 16th, '10, 19:23

eminematherstan wrote:i liked the hook too sajn. :smoking:

Oh yeah, it was killa :worship:
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Re: Geno - Play With My Heart

Postby Sam. » Aug 16th, '10, 19:27

SajN wrote:
eminematherstan wrote:i liked the hook too sajn. :smoking:

Oh yeah, it was killa :worship:

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Re: Geno - Play With My Heart

Postby Sam. » Aug 20th, '10, 19:06

pm some one to chk it fool.
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