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Till I Collapse Parody

Postby ChinaShopTaurus » Aug 18th, '10, 02:07

One of my friends wrote this about a kid named Jalen who steals everyone's stuff and crashes at people's houses and is a huge freeloader. It made me smile lol.

cause sometimes you feel empty,
feel needy, and when you feel needy, you feel like you wanna just take shit.
but you gotta think of the cons, you gotta make that inner choice
and just pull that shit out of bags and stuff it down under your shorts and walk away
and not be a buster, no matter how much you wanna just go back for more goods and collapse.

[Other Intro]
Yo ride, yo ride, yo ride I need a ride
Yo ride, yo ride, yo ride I need a ride
Yo ride, yo ride, yo ride I need a ride
Yo ride, yo ride, yo ride I need a ride

[Verse #1]
Till i collapse i stealin these rags long as i see em
Till the day that i'm caught you'll never say that i'm not buyin them
Cause when i am not i am stop takin them
And i am not freeload and i'm just not ja-a-len.
Nice pair of old shoes, when i improve, sending you in shock of who took all your families food
Contentious shots of ravenousness did not allow plentiful stock
Marijuana is just not helping out.
The criminal cop framing my pop draining my growing stock to rock millions of cava drifters.
Your items are mine, like it or not you're gonna deal with it can't be caught, i have escaped the rock
I talk it a lot, when i'm on pot is it just a bunch of hype or can i come out on top and walk the walk
I fiddle a little that is my prob listen pop you civils forgot jiddle can't take being caught.
"If I sign something for you, and I see it on Ebay,
when you go home, I'm gonna be under your Bed"
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Re: Till I Collapse Parody

Postby gutawafang » Aug 18th, '10, 03:14

Hmmm...

Kentucky Fried Chicken.

Hmmm...
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Re: Till I Collapse Parody

Postby Just Silver » Aug 20th, '10, 18:09

i thought for the most part it was clever
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