I haven't written shit in a WHILE,so here it goes...

[ThomasJ]

Bare with me...

It's kinda hard right now,my feet sore from the walk
Could never fit in,still I keep talking the talk
Keep doing what I gotta do to survive but it's harsh
If you running full speed but you're denied from the start
Rivers cried out in my bed when it's nighttime
I never was good at anything,I just steady write rhymes
But it ain't paying off yet,I ain't got Chevy Corvettes
My life's a big mess like : "Ready,Go,Set"
Sometimes I wonder why did my mother give birth
To a low-life punk who would love to leave Earth
But I'm too much of a coward to do something' 'bout it
So I use this wack verse as my motherfucking outlet
I wonder what my future'll be like,will I grow old?
Will I keep learning shit,till I know all?
All I know is,on my death bed there'll be no fear
Shit,I might as well end it all here

[Just Silver]

liked it alot

and that "ready go set" line

[ThomasJ]

liked it alot

and that "ready go set" line

Thanks holmes.
I'll feed your stuff later today.

[Steve Spag]

And you shouldn't have started writing again!

Nah, I'm playing of course. THIS piece was great man! Everything from the vocab, to the flow, to your nice use of multi's made this a very enjoyable verse to me. This is the subject matter I like, so I found it really relateable.

Great work man, keep it up!

[ThomasJ]

And you shouldn't have started writing again!

Nah, I'm playing of course. THIS piece was great man! Everything from the vocab, to the flow, to your nice use of multi's made this a very enjoyable verse to me. This is the subject matter I like, so I found it really relateable.

Great work man, keep it up!

You scared me.
Yo,thanks a LOT on the feed,I'll feed anything you need.

[Steve Spag]

And you shouldn't have started writing again!

Nah, I'm playing of course. THIS piece was great man! Everything from the vocab, to the flow, to your nice use of multi's made this a very enjoyable verse to me. This is the subject matter I like, so I found it really relateable.

Great work man, keep it up!

You scared me.
Yo,thanks a LOT on the feed,I'll feed anything you need.

Hahaha, no problem at all dude!

I don't do much in the C.W. section anymore but if you wanna check out any of my tracks they're mostly all up at http://www.soundclick.com/stevespag

If you wanna hit me with a PM or something later be sure to let me know what ya' think!

Keep up the good work man, for real.