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Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby classthe_king » Sep 7th, '10, 01:00

(Solace)
No stopping the sound, you'll get shot with a round,
You'll get got with that wristwatch walking around,
To the haters on my list, I keep crossing them out,
It's bitch stalking so what this shit talking's about,
I taste achievement, in this rap vault I'm locking it down,
Make believing? Haters speaking like I'm talk of the town,
Get tossed to the ground, I'll shoot rhymes to your brains,
Fuck Peace, cut you to pieces and then hide the remains,
I'll fight to the grave, won't abide to your claims,
Tell the jury? I'll convince them it's a lie that you say,
Knife to your face, why should I be nice to you lames?
Consider yourself a sacrifice or it's ya wife to be slain,
Remember your death could be a life that you save,
Open ya head, give new meaning to "I like to get brain",
You're a whiney mistake, I hope you choke and you die,
Secondhand, fill your lungs with the smoke from my lines.

(Sentus)
If you hate my craft then you will face my wrath,
When I take a step on your turf and raise my flag
Any second I’ll burst, the worst weapon on Earth
Soon the Heavens will burn in this blaze I’ve had
They praise my tracks cause I cripple opponents
My tongue slashes mc’s like the sickle of Cronus
I live for the moments when the sound is bumping
The ground is thumping and the crowd is jumping
They love when my claws rip, they fuckin applaud it
This king is Peter from Narnia, stuck in the closet
These new cats liked my music so they borrowed
A couple of my lines but for every single bar owed
I’ll have served em once and sent crawlin home
Cause when it comes down to it you’re still all alone
You’ll all get thrown but I’m not talkin the crown
Step on the stage and get knocked off of the ground

Lightwork :smoking:
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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby Solace » Sep 7th, '10, 01:04

That was some good stuff Class. My verse was recycled throwaway so you easily outshined me. Notice your structure has changed a little too. Keep at it. :y:
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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Sep 7th, '10, 16:51

sentus was dope as fuck. :y:
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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby classthe_king » Sep 7th, '10, 22:51

Thankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkks
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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby dR3 » Sep 9th, '10, 00:57

Class fucking killed this, the structure is perfect.

Sorry Omar, but that's reality in this case. :whistle:
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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby Solace » Sep 9th, '10, 01:21

Mine is a throwaway verse that I thought was wack so I wasnt going to use it and he asked if I had a spare verse so I gave him this
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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby dR3 » Sep 9th, '10, 01:43

Solace wrote:Mine is a throwaway verse that I thought was wack so I wasnt going to use it and he asked if I had a spare verse so I gave him this

I know man, I read your previous post, I was just trying to wind you up. :shifty:
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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Sep 9th, '10, 18:23

dR.dR3 wrote:
Solace wrote:Mine is a throwaway verse that I thought was wack so I wasnt going to use it and he asked if I had a spare verse so I gave him this

I know man, I read your previous post, I was just trying to wind you up. :shifty:


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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby Robbie G » Sep 9th, '10, 20:33

good job keepin it real nikkas :b:
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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby classthe_king » Sep 11th, '10, 03:55

Thanks guys
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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby classthe_king » Sep 13th, '10, 03:11

Chet Starr wrote:I'm always a sucker for ancient greek references :flutter:


Me too :worship:
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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby Xray » Sep 23rd, '10, 17:32

Really liked your piece Solace. The flow was good shit. You both have neat structures, sometimes you say easy hyped punches just the need to flow, I think you can work on that to be more consistent. Sentus, I really like your slow paced punchlines, and the overall seriousness in your rhymes. Dope collab guys.
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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby classthe_king » Sep 24th, '10, 01:00

Thanks bro, I'll work on that
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Re: Sentus and Solace keepin it real

Postby classthe_king » Sep 24th, '10, 19:56

McMaybe wrote:If you rework a few words, this can be a 10/10.


I changed the end to

They love when my claws rip, they fuckin applaud it
This king is Peter from Narnia, stuck in the closet
Enough of the garbage when I’m reachin for mics
Wack rappers huddle up and start screamin in fright
I’m leadin the fight, beware, the cobra will get you
I rule with a reign not even Noah can live through
I lent you a few throwaways for you to call ya own
But when it comes down to it you’re still all alone

Cause that help it?
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