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edge and yah-hah- i could go insane

Postby Edge » Sep 17th, '10, 04:20

edge:
chillin with mary jane, in the back of the plane
hit you in your skull and get to crackin ya brain
ya wack and insane, cant believe i even mentioned you
dont be lookin for me, imma send my henchmen through
its goin down like a bridge with no suspension do
when i step to the mic, you could feel the tension brew
im fuckin up your dayplans, like detention do
thats what you get for being a class clown
im raps valedictorian, bringin all the cats down
so if your a pussy, better back up
i got every quality you lack of
imma put the knife down and bring the mack up
im done, call in yah-hah for the back up

i watch ya veins pop, blood spills like its rain drops
when will i die, not til my reign stops
and thats never, forevers the time on my insane watch
i could go insane, watch
blow ya mind, and watch as ya brian flops
on the floor, sit back and laugh, give it a deranged squash

yah-hah:
Yah-hah's the Sickest savage who's kickin habits,
From sickened addicts with Native American wicked magic,
I'm splittin cracked lips without givin chaptsick,
I'm given wack kids wat their lame embarassin writtens lackin,
With the quickest action I strike with the power of 100 tribes,
Speakin words so absurd those the Earth devoured come to life!
This isn't the last days, it's down to the last seconds,
Wear a mask when you pass breathless through mad weapons,
The last henchman who asked questions met the blade so fast,
With my padded vest I stabbed his chest and made HIM wear the Jason mask,
I'm blazin past the ancient class of quaker ash yelling 'NATIVE PRIDE'
I wait and hide grip hate and knives with the plainsmen tribes Screamin STAY ALIVE!

edge:
i watch ya veins pop, blood spills like its rain drops
when will i die, not til my reign stops
and thats never, forevers the time on my insane watch
i could go insane, watch
blow ya mind, and watch as ya brian flops
on the floor, sit back and laugh, give it a deranged squash
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: edge and yah-hah- i could go insane

Postby Weather Man » Sep 17th, '10, 07:04

Really liked the chorus of this, both of you did good. Keep it up fellas
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Re: edge and yah-hah- i could go insane

Postby Edge » Sep 17th, '10, 14:55

thanks for the feed man
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: edge and yah-hah- i could go insane

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 17th, '10, 21:47

Hahaha I was in a multi mood :D Edge comin back from the grave man it's good to see
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: edge and yah-hah- i could go insane

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 17th, '10, 21:50

Great multis from both of you. The chorus was nice. And i liked the crazy, insane concept.

And Yah-hah you killed it with your multis tho :y:
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Re: edge and yah-hah- i could go insane

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 17th, '10, 21:52

Jay-Hova wrote:Great multis from both of you. The chorus was nice. And i liked the crazy, insane concept.

And Yah-hah you killed it with your multis tho :y:


Thanks bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: edge and yah-hah- i could go insane

Postby Edge » Sep 18th, '10, 01:29

Yah-hah wrote:Hahaha I was in a multi mood :D Edge comin back from the grave man it's good to see


glad to be back lol

Jay-Hova wrote:Great multis from both of you. The chorus was nice. And i liked the crazy, insane concept.

And Yah-hah you killed it with your multis tho :y:


thanks man
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Re: edge and yah-hah- i could go insane

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 25th, '10, 22:21

Bumpin :sweating:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: edge and yah-hah- i could go insane

Postby Doctor Skittlez » Sep 25th, '10, 22:24

This Was Pretty Dope. Was Really feeling The Multies. The Chorus, I Wasn't Realy Digging That Much, Sounded Kinda Repetitive, But The Rest Was Fire.
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Re: edge and yah-hah- i could go insane

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 25th, '10, 22:27

blow ya mind, and watch as ya brian flops



should be brain haha, anyways those verses are pretty nice but they didn't have much depth in it
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: edge and yah-hah- i could go insane

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 25th, '10, 22:33

^ I was gonna say that. Yeah this was one of those just throw some nice multis out there ya know, we both do that often. But thanks for the feed bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: edge and yah-hah- i could go insane

Postby Edge » Sep 26th, '10, 09:16

Yah-hah wrote:^ I was gonna say that. Yeah this was one of those just throw some nice multis out there ya know, we both do that often. But thanks for the feed bro


we really do lol thanks for the feed guys
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