borderline

[Enimee]

garbage

[Enimee]

no problem sweetheart

[classthe_king]

I thought this part was really good

finally face all the time that you've wasted
with a sign of impatience & combined in a time
with the rhymes of a vagrant.. and find time to say this
"resistance is silent & painless",
remind us to pay in, or stay with a pistol & violence

But this line threw the flow off for me big time
we can make it a crime this demise of john conner is final

I think if you just made it
we make it a crime this demise of john conner is final

it would sound better or if you just took out one syllable anywhere in the line

[Jay-Hova]

Couldn't find the flow but that's my problem lol. I think this was poetic kind of like almost all your writtens...which is good

And it's good to see someone that doesn't overkill with multis and punchlines but instead writes meaningful shit

Good stuff man. Keep it moving

[Jay-Hova]

Thanks, jay.. Yeah, my flow's mad weird haha. You'd have to hear me spit it to understand it. Even then IDK. At any rate, thanks for the feed and the recognition, bro. I'll check out some of your ish.

You do audio? I'd definitely check it out if you do

[Jay-Hova]

Thanks, jay.. Yeah, my flow's mad weird haha. You'd have to hear me spit it to understand it. Even then IDK. At any rate, thanks for the feed and the recognition, bro. I'll check out some of your ish.

You do audio? I'd definitely check it out if you do

Yeah, man. Everything I post up is lyrics to a song. Apart from the text disses I got dragged into. They'll all be on an EP that's coming out soon (within a the next 3 months). You probably don't want to hear my older ish, it's not a good representation of who I am as an artist today.

I'll be on the lookout for that EP then or if I miss it just PM me

[B.A.D.]

did you blocked me on msn???

damn, I'm really looking forward to the audio on this piece, I can picture a perfect like sampled slow hook would do the job here. The flow is the only thing I can't get to a 100%, so thats exactly why I am desperate for the audio.

real good verses