Childs Lullaby ADDED SECOND VERSE!!! READ!!!

[classthe_king]

Your word choice honestly amazes me

[Solace]

That was amazing, and it's inspiring me. Thanks, and excellent work. I love your diction and the how great every rhyme sounds. Keep at it.

[Steve Spag]

Epic.

Enough said because you already know what I'm thinking.

[Solace]

This is definitely a great piece. Second verse was great, but this line just disappointed me

so "didn't have" was her first name, her second was "self esteem",

I get what you were trying to pull off and you probably like how it was done. I just never liked those "first name is, last name is" and it's especially really annoying after Drake's little line in Forever. Without that being said, there's practically no complaints. I really did enjoy reading this

[Devil'sAdvocate]

wow maybe that was fuckin dope

great use of words and metaphors

[Xray]

First verse was poetry at it's finest.

"Love me like a child loves a lullaby" line was sick.

Maybe dropping lines from Einstein's mind once again? WORD.