STEVE SPAG - Wilderbeast

[Steve Spag]

You're 2 Late.

[classthe_king]

Did you mean Wildebeest? Also I don't know why you would want to be a Wildebeest on the beat.
I was really disapointed by your rhyming cause you usually have great rhyming. Some of it didn't even rhyme but if it did it was one, two syllables max. It was also just a ton of random things and didn't have much continuity holding it together. I think you can do much better.

[B.A.D.]

Thanks for the PM Its great, this way we dont miss the tracks haha.

Damn, after reading this, I dont know. Its vert tricky beacuse I know the way you flow and how you make the words extend and rhyme in a strange accent lol, but thats the problem with text, when you are rapping it doesnt matter cuz we listen and you can pronounce the words in a way to make them rhyme, but for example if we flow it on our own, and without a beat we're gonna have a hard time gettin "I'm called steven" to "I'm not jesus" lol, see what I mean.

what I like a lot is thats its pretti unique, I see you went into a less lyrical approach with this one, but you have interesting lines like "you can cut my brakes but I'll still roll free". and things like that, the methaphors are good.

But yeah, you really dont need any feed at all, only like advices. You gotta switch the flow everyonce in a while, cuz everytrack starts to sound the same. What I do like is that you know how to switch topics perfectly, so thats a great thing, although not in the same track hahaha cuz then it gets random

let me know when the audio is out

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the PM Its great, this way we dont miss the tracks haha.

Damn, after reading this, I dont know. Its vert tricky beacuse I know the way you flow and how you make the words extend and rhyme in a strange accent lol, but thats the problem with text, when you are rapping it doesnt matter cuz we listen and you can pronounce the words in a way to make them rhyme, but for example if we flow it on our own, and without a beat we're gonna have a hard time gettin "I'm called steven" to "I'm not jesus" lol, see what I mean.

what I like a lot is thats its pretti unique, I see you went into a less lyrical approach with this one, but you have interesting lines like "you can cut my brakes but I'll still roll free". and things like that, the methaphors are good.

But yeah, you really dont need any feed at all, only like advices. You gotta switch the flow everyonce in a while, cuz everytrack starts to sound the same. What I do like is that you know how to switch topics perfectly, so thats a great thing, although not in the same track hahaha cuz then it gets random

let me know when the audio is out

Thanks for the feed bro! Yeah I feel ya' dude, you gotta hear the beat to really understand how it's gonna sound. There isn't really a lot of that word-extending in this song though, I really cut back on that a lot during my "Ready Or Not" recording sessions. However, the beat is slow and somber at points which of course I had to make my style match, haha. I'll deff. post up it up once it's all done and mastered.

@Class, No I meant Wilderbeast, the slang term, not the actual animal, lol. Look it up at Urban Dictionary. I'm not talking about the "nastiness" though, just the secludedness, uniqueness, lol.

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thanks for the feed you 2!

Killa, that's actually not a bad idea, however on the beat there isn't really room for a bridge...I may try fucking with it though to see if I can make it work. Good looking out man!

[Ka0t1c]

i wasn't feeling it content wise or flow wise, but i look forward to hearing it put to a beat. so right now i'm on the fence with this. it just didn't seem YOU!

[Rain Matrix]

cool concept but the wildebeast may not be beast enough... they are certainly beasts that are more beast then the said beast, the wildebeast

all I can say is stay in beast mode?

[Steve Spag]

Thank's for the honest feed ya'll, and yes Rain, I'ma keep beasting it!

[Arabian Shady]

WHEN ARE YOU GNA STOP WID DAT BEASTALITY SHYTE MAYNE?!!!!!!!!
lol i found the flow as well, cause its like i can hear your voice goin on in my head and you have this mothodic way of flowin so yea , flow was pretty cool.
I like killaz idea, i think you SHOUDL give it a try bro
CAnt wait for the audio!
PEACE!

[Steve Spag]

WHEN ARE YOU GNA STOP WID DAT BEASTALITY SHYTE MAYNE?!!!!!!!!
lol i found the flow as well, cause its like i can hear your voice goin on in my head and you have this mothodic way of flowin so yea , flow was pretty cool.
I like killaz idea, i think you SHOUDL give it a try bro
CAnt wait for the audio!
PEACE!

Thanks for checkin' bro, it's always a treat to hear your 2 cents!

[B.A.D.]

Thanks for the PM Its great, this way we dont miss the tracks haha.

Damn, after reading this, I dont know. Its vert tricky beacuse I know the way you flow and how you make the words extend and rhyme in a strange accent lol, but thats the problem with text, when you are rapping it doesnt matter cuz we listen and you can pronounce the words in a way to make them rhyme, but for example if we flow it on our own, and without a beat we're gonna have a hard time gettin "I'm called steven" to "I'm not jesus" lol, see what I mean.

what I like a lot is thats its pretti unique, I see you went into a less lyrical approach with this one, but you have interesting lines like "you can cut my brakes but I'll still roll free". and things like that, the methaphors are good.

But yeah, you really dont need any feed at all, only like advices. You gotta switch the flow everyonce in a while, cuz everytrack starts to sound the same. What I do like is that you know how to switch topics perfectly, so thats a great thing, although not in the same track hahaha cuz then it gets random

let me know when the audio is out

Thanks for the feed bro! Yeah I feel ya' dude, you gotta hear the beat to really understand how it's gonna sound. There isn't really a lot of that word-extending in this song though, I really cut back on that a lot during my "Ready Or Not" recording sessions. However, the beat is slow and somber at points which of course I had to make my style match, haha. I'll deff. post up it up once it's all done and mastered.

can't wait then

hey I have a new beat again you might like. but, have you done something with the other 2 I sent ya?

[Steve Spag]

^^
Yeah bro, I wrote some shit to them but have not recorded yet! I'll send you some lyrics next time I'm around on MSN.