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Losing Myself

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Losing Myself

Postby Culture » Sep 22nd, '10, 22:14

Word to the wise, don't take a step in my path
I'm wreckin em bad, a train that's derailed from the tracks
Incredible raps, you guys is edible snacks
To the lyrical beast beheading you fast
Slash ya neck, let it splash...into a bloody pool
yo you shouldn't say that shit...who are the fuck are
I got the illest rhyme delivery to cripple teens
I injure teams and smash spines to smitherines
Get the army, get the marines, a wicked MC
Dirt ridden fatigues, creeping in through the leaves
and foliage, I'm owning kids, word to nerds I'm PWNin em
I'm on the phone again, flowing sick, unholy shit
I'm focused in, zoning in, scoping the kill
I hope that you're real, not another phony clone I can't feel
Set the tone, let it build, snowball effect in this bitch
I reckon I'm lyrically fit, but mentally twisted and sick
So how can I get a grip, things are getting out of hand
I rap circles in this ring and wrap em round ya mans
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby Solace » Sep 22nd, '10, 23:27

Hey Cole lmao
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby Culture » Sep 22nd, '10, 23:34

Wtf, how bad do you think I rap? This was intentionally supposed to look rookie. Fuck.
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 22nd, '10, 23:57

your too good to make something amateur Cole :y:
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby Solace » Sep 22nd, '10, 23:58

Culture wrote:Wtf, how bad do you think I rap? This was intentionally supposed to look rookie. Fuck.

Swear to god you posted this already on another alias too. :\
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby classthe_king » Sep 23rd, '10, 00:15

How many times have I told you you have to float around the eminem section first so then when you venture out to the cw and rb sections no one questions it.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby Culture » Sep 23rd, '10, 00:47

classthe_king wrote:How many times have I told you you have to float around the eminem section first so then when you venture out to the cw and rb sections no one questions it.

Dude that takes time
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby classthe_king » Sep 23rd, '10, 00:47

Culture wrote:
classthe_king wrote:How many times have I told you you have to float around the eminem section first so then when you venture out to the cw and rb sections no one questions it.

Dude that takes time


I know lmao but its better then getting banned over and over
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby Culture » Sep 23rd, '10, 00:51

Ehhhh maybe

Solace wrote:
Culture wrote:Wtf, how bad do you think I rap? This was intentionally supposed to look rookie. Fuck.

Swear to god you posted this already on another alias too. :\


I just made it up keystyle so I could spit it to some people later, don't have to impress them lyrically

and I may have recycled....or maybe I'm repetetive idk
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby classthe_king » Sep 23rd, '10, 00:53

I've never seen any of this
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby Culture » Sep 23rd, '10, 00:54

classthe_king wrote:I've never seen any of this

Exactly. This type of shit wouldn't make it past my drafting process. Fuck is Solace on?
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby classthe_king » Sep 23rd, '10, 01:00

Culture wrote:
classthe_king wrote:I've never seen any of this

Exactly. This type of shit wouldn't make it past my drafting process. Fuck is Solace on?


Idk :shakehead:
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby Culture » Sep 23rd, '10, 01:16

Ƨteven© wrote:Waddup Cole.

:y:


HOW DID YOU FIGURE IT OUT :o MY COVER HAS BEEN BLOWN
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby Culture » Sep 23rd, '10, 01:23

Idk, been busy lately, doing stuff in real life, kind of boring

Anyone wanna collab while I'm here?
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Re: Losing Myself

Postby Culture » Sep 23rd, '10, 01:27

Come on, it's not about outshining. It's about making a dope drop. We can do some Rhyme Asylum shit.
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