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Re: Paper Bag (Song looking for a FT!)

Postby Steve Spag » Sep 22nd, '10, 23:36

Very dope verse man. I'd throw my name into the collab-hat but we already got enough tracks planned and we might as well try and let someone else shine a bit, haha.

Can't really give you much in-depth feed on this piece without saying anything new but everything looks great and it's structurally sound. The flow was very smooth and the rhymes were on-point as usual.

Keep it up brosef!
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Re: Paper Bag (Song looking for a FT!)

Postby Weather Man » Sep 22nd, '10, 23:59

This is really good, hope you find a feature for it.
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Re: Paper Bag (Song looking for a FT!)

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 23rd, '10, 00:08

well I'm always down for a collab with anybody, and we havent collabed since... hmm... 2006??

I'll try to convince the painter that even graffiti is art.

damn, nice :y:

either way, would love to see a finished version of this, even if with someone else, cuz I liked this piece :y:
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Re: Paper Bag (Song looking for a FT!)

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 23rd, '10, 01:52

McMaybe wrote:and axe, we should do something man... Pick a topic if you'd prefer something different from this ^^


definitely man, well I do like heartbrake deep songs, But I also like more "Devil don't fuck with me" songs.
that's a title right there hahah :y:

also, if you want to hear something newer from me, I made a short promo track, its up in the audio stage
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Re: Paper Bag (Song looking for a FT!)

Postby Robbie G » Sep 23rd, '10, 01:58

That was great. :y:

you have a mixtape coming out?
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Re: Paper Bag (Song looking for a FT!)

Postby Culture » Sep 23rd, '10, 01:58

Big Ax-D wrote:
McMaybe wrote:and axe, we should do something man... Pick a topic if you'd prefer something different from this ^^


definitely man, well I do like heartbrake deep songs, But I also like more "Devil don't fuck with me" songs.
that's a title right there hahah :y:

also, if you want to hear something newer from me, I made a short promo track, its up in the audio stage


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Re: Paper Bag (Song looking for a FT!)

Postby Culture » Sep 23rd, '10, 02:14

McMaybe wrote:
Robbie G wrote:That was great. :y:

you have a mixtape coming out?


Yeah man, I think you guys will like it.


@ Cole: Nostalgia bro.


No doubt. Is this a real mixtape or is this another one of Maybe's Myths.
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Re: Paper Bag (Song looking for a FT!)

Postby Culture » Sep 23rd, '10, 02:24

McMaybe wrote:As real as can be. It's been in the works for years... the problem is every time I have something, I scrap it for new material. But this time, I just recorded EVERYTHING, and molded a mixtape.

Well if this Detox's you just ruined my year. I'll make sure to review it.
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Re: Paper Bag (Song looking for a FT!)

Postby classthe_king » Sep 23rd, '10, 02:36

McMaybe wrote:
Culture wrote:
McMaybe wrote:As real as can be. It's been in the works for years... the problem is every time I have something, I scrap it for new material. But this time, I just recorded EVERYTHING, and molded a mixtape.

Well if this Detox's you just ruined my year. I'll make sure to review it.



Please do.. I hope people will be honest this time around, unlike my last shit haha. :y:

And don't worry, this is coming and ready. Already have the covers printed, booklet made and cd cases sitting in my living room.


Dude I want one
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Re: Paper Bag (Song looking for a FT!)

Postby classthe_king » Sep 23rd, '10, 02:40

McMaybe wrote:Haha hell yeah man ^ They're free, you can download from my website "www.1guy0job.com (when available, obviously) or pay for shipping (whatever it is for you) and get a physical copy with lyrics booklet and color cover and back.


I'm deffinately going to :worship:
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Re: Paper Bag (Song looking for a FT!)

Postby Culture » Sep 23rd, '10, 02:43

McMaybe wrote:
Culture wrote:
McMaybe wrote:As real as can be. It's been in the works for years... the problem is every time I have something, I scrap it for new material. But this time, I just recorded EVERYTHING, and molded a mixtape.

Well if this Detox's you just ruined my year. I'll make sure to review it.



Please do.. I hope people will be honest this time around, unlike my last shit haha. :y:

And don't worry, this is coming and ready. Already have the covers printed, booklet made and cd cases sitting in my living room.


Well I prob won't be the least biased but I won't lead you on.

Count me in to buy one.
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