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Violent Love

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Violent Love

Postby Xray » Sep 23rd, '10, 21:56

    You pull bars, I'm spittin' wetter sars on the weathers cast
    If I was the stars I would let the whole planet dark
    And cause more crust openings than a volcanic spark
    Your dawgs bark cause they sense this Heist
    I got you synchronized like you reminiscin' nice
    I wrote the letter S on her chest with her vagina's blood
    I gave her more cuts than an axe gave it's wood
    More curves on her body than a scissors carving scars
    I wrote the book of cards, I got you on the deck of my palms
    I'll drop nuclear weapons on you before you suicide
    And give you ill shit like radiation in sewage pipes
    I fear for your life, if you was my lioness
    then I would be your dearest type. Your nearest ride
    I'm your escape from life, I thug you right
    Like Bonnie and Clyde, I am your Heist, and you're my sheisty

Lemme know what you think of this.
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Re: Violent Love

Postby Evil-Genius » Sep 23rd, '10, 22:00

Nice lines :flower:
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Re: Violent Love

Postby mcZu » Sep 23rd, '10, 22:06

A couple of words seem to not be rhyming (Wood and Sheisty), I don't know if you're going to slant rhyme those words with the Australian accent and make it rhyme, however, the overal concept seems slightly different from your usual concepts. Which is a good thing. Vocabulary was good, expression of thought was creative and you got your point accros. I like it. A nice lil' verse. Keep it up.
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Re: Violent Love

Postby Xray » Sep 23rd, '10, 22:18

mcZu wrote:A couple of words seem to not be rhyming (Wood and Sheisty), I don't know if you're going to slant rhyme those words with the Australian accent and make it rhyme, however, the overal concept seems slightly different from your usual concepts. Which is a good thing. Vocabulary was good, expression of thought was creative and you got your point accros. I like it. A nice lil' verse. Keep it up.

Thanks for the feed bro, they were not supposed to rhyme.
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Re: Violent Love

Postby mcZu » Sep 23rd, '10, 22:47

I see, I take it they do fit in with the flow of the whole verse, right?
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Re: Violent Love

Postby Robbie G » Sep 23rd, '10, 23:16

I enjoyed it, definitely record it.
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Re: Violent Love

Postby Republic » Sep 24th, '10, 00:34

Why is it that since Relapse dropped, everyone goes for the serial killer subject?
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Re: Violent Love

Postby Xray » Sep 24th, '10, 01:41

McMaybe wrote:I like how some words sounded like off-rhymes... You've elevated bro, this is one of your best verses. I don't know.. some of the lines were disturbingly imaginative. Very nice... 9/10

I agree, it's def my best verse since ages. Thanks bro. :y:

Republic wrote:Why is it that since Relapse dropped, everyone goes for the serial killer subject?

Lol? Ok thanks for the feed?
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