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Nothing in particular

Postby J Roc » Sep 24th, '10, 01:38

i can gain super powers , and lift up a van
Whos Gonna Stop me? Riddle Me That
Nobody Escaping After Getting Me Mad
Unless Black Dudes In a Dark Room Become The invisable Man
I Robbbed Ned Flanders Cuz Hes My Neighborino
Little Did i Know It was a Can of body Odor Flavoured Deo
Time To Bring It Back.. Do Whut i Say When my Fingers Snap
Now My Skin Is Black So To Look White Again I made Omar Go & Get a Tan
Miranda n Chambers Buyin Plane Tickets Juss To Kiss Each Other?
She Got Me nude,-Dawg Then She 'Drew-Roc' Like Chris's Brother (Cuz Everybody hates....you)
MC Maybe Aint a Dickryder, But He Loves My Cock
But I Don Like Stevens Lips So He Can Fuck Right Offf........ haha ;)
Its Almost Seven: Thirty .. Ur Words Are Weapons? Then i guess i Better worry
Sticks & Stones May hit My bones But Words Will Never Hurt Me
Roc knew He Was Con-fused... Look-At-It my Bullets-'Stick' Like Ross Glue
Wrestle-Me Without a Referee & Get the 'Pedigree' Like My Dog's Foood

T .................
H .................
SEE...................

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Re: Nothing in particular

Postby Xray » Sep 24th, '10, 02:45

Wrestle-Me Without a Referee & Get the 'Pedigree' Like My Dog's Foood

:laughing:

Nicely executed lmao.

Nice drop, some lines were boring, but it was overall good. Lines from Omar-Steven fucked up the piece for me. Would of been much nicer without those lines.
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Nothing in particular

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 24th, '10, 18:59

Last line was dope haha
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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