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Yah-hah and Coleon-Resurrected for killer shit

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 25th, '10, 22:15

Just some killer shit........................fuck a chorus :coffee: (Oh and structure)



Coleon
My heart's as cold as the soul of a witch
Or the...polar caps during a solar eclipse
Gripped my...liquid sword, left it frozen and stiff
Now I'll ice pick a bone with any foe I'm against
Open my wrists...blood coagulates to swords
Run forward and decapitate your force
Don't...meddle with death, let it take it's course
Unless you practice magic then reanimate the corpse
Ofcourse the title goes to A man with sick recitals
Not simple styles, harness the beat and kill my rivals
With my arrival whole islands shake
Tidal wakes seen from eyes in space
Tectonic plates break from seismic waves
And turn entire states to fire lakes
My tribe has reigned since the climate change
We're prime apes developing rhyme games
Became neanderthrals and had to hide in caves
From the glacier walls that came and iced the plains
But when they thaw we'll rise again
Look what I became, some'll say that I'm insane
You kids are lame spitting pop on tracks
A style so trashed it should come with a shot of Jack
I toss em back, and eat up bubble gum raps
It's Coleon, I put in work when I punch in a track


Yah-hah
The Native American plus the greatest of terrorist,
Riding my horse roamin with flames on my chariot,
Until I'm takin heroin with my Grimey neighbor,
My saliva slightly flavored with tiny vapors,
I'll leave a giant crater in an icy glacier through my writing paper,
The most frightening player with a Jason mask, Freddy claws and football pads,
I'll hit you with a hook or jab, slice ya face when ya hibernate now you look all sad,
Waitin with the sniper rifle, dont let the viper bite you putin out the wackest shit,
Pacifist with massive fists takin so many massive hits ya back'll twitch,
In a boxing match with Thor until the acid pours if you're poised then try me,
With Native boys so grimey with the loudest voice I'm rhyming,
I will put poison ivy in your poisoned IV till you hear the noise of dying,
It's your choice to try me just watch for the savage lurkin,
Destined to die an average person so I hide myself just to make you look past the curtain,
Now that you cats are squirmin with the rats and vermin,
Run into my own funeral with my casket burnin,
I pass the person blaspheming the pastor's sermon,
Screaming like 'God dammit this anger management class aint working
So I'm stuck provin these humans are uselss so I'm lettin loose at high angles,
With such high aimin I'll soon be shootin my angels in the Bermuda Triangle,
I keep chasing you with jasons mask like 'wat are you runnin for'?
My uppercuts will make you stumble more than tryin to juggle swords,
While playing tug of war with a bungee chord in a thunderstorm,
My bloods under warm, defrosting in the summer warmth,
I've got the wanted force of a hundred hoardes of jungle boars
Native running from the depths where the thunders born,
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Yah-hah and Coleon-Resurrected for killer shit

Postby Doctor Skittlez » Sep 25th, '10, 22:28

DOOOOPPPPPPEEEEEEE!!!

Shit, Coleon's Elevated Hella Since I Was Last On...

Like I Said, This Was Pretty Fucking Dope... I Can't Really Complain About Anything. This Was Fire.

Yah Hah, We Needa Do A Collab Sometime.
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Re: Yah-hah and Coleon-Resurrected for killer shit

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 25th, '10, 22:34

pretty sick! makes me wanna write something...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Yah-hah and Coleon-Resurrected for killer shit

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 25th, '10, 22:37

Thanks bro, just hit me up sometime
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Yah-hah and Coleon-Resurrected for killer shit

Postby classthe_king » Sep 26th, '10, 03:05

Cole murked this lol
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Yah-hah and Coleon-Resurrected for killer shit

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 28th, '10, 23:30

Yeah my flow if different you'd have top hear me rap it to get it someimes lol thank for checkin
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Yah-hah and Coleon-Resurrected for killer shit

Postby BILI » Sep 28th, '10, 23:37

Nicee drop guys :y:

Cole had a nice verse,that shit flowed very well,your vocab is :y: man.Everything was on point.Yah yours was on fire also,only thing I dont like is stucture,and I know you dont care about it so nevermind.Multies were dope as always,your rhymes/multies are my fav on this board.
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Re: Yah-hah and Coleon-Resurrected for killer shit

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 28th, '10, 23:40

:laughing: @ the structure. Yeah I just wrote it all out and when I had it all out on the new topic post and I was writin the subject I noticed how extra fuckin terrible my structure was so I wrote fuck structure at the top haha thanks for checking brother
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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