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Punctuation Remix

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Punctuation Remix

Postby mcZu » Sep 25th, '10, 22:27

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Who's better than Zu over here, full stop
Who's had an exceptional year
Question mark, I'm the greatest
Exclamation.. Quotation

Capital Z, now wait for the ellipsis to eclipse this
A semicolon is waiting in the distance
For instance, people know my linguistics
Cause people to be vexed, they seem stressed
An Angel quotes my sayings, about to use a guillemet
They equal a silhouette of ten percent
Ampersand, capital I, understand the catch
I highlight the asterisk, as I risk to expose a solid shift
Of a capital O, period, capital D, insert solidus
‘cause you’ll stroke if you're used to average lyrics
Exclamation mark, I excel, then distinguish
Skill marks my speech with speech marks to sound offensive
While I speak art and seek heart, apostrophes.. of course
I astonish and compliment accomplishments with ease
My source, question mark, then a space
Capital letter B, then I rain, the center maze
In this verse is self, hyphen, centered and amazed
Comma, these days people love to slash backs
But they know I’m special, so I insert a backslash
It’s infinite, dash, zero, for me, slash, you lack
The capability, you can say there are plural signs
Of me at the top like an A in a circle sign
Whole verse an encircled line..

Who's better than Zu over here, full stop
Who's had an exceptional year
Question mark, I'm the greatest
Exclamation.. Quotation

Punctuation, I’ll keep it in rotation
The road’s blatant and the show’s pavement
Is where it becomes relevant..
I show adjacent
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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Re: Punctuation Remix

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 25th, '10, 22:39

Wow dude that was dope. I think you should ghost for Lupe so that fool will put something out soon. Hahaha dope bro :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Punctuation Remix

Postby mcZu » Sep 27th, '10, 21:51

Thanks, Yah. Appreciate it. Lupe is gonna bring out some dope stuff soon, trust me.
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