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My soul has a pen...And it writes lyrics too..

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Re: My soul has a pen...And it writes lyrics too..

by ThomasJ » Sep 26th, '10, 15:26

I loved this.
Sorry about the situation you're going through tho. :n:

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Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...

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Re: My soul has a pen...And it writes lyrics too..

by J Roc » Sep 26th, '10, 19:09

First of allll .... THC

Second Of Allll ... very deeep

Third of allll ....... nice flow

4th of allll ............. THC!

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Re: My soul has a pen...And it writes lyrics too..

by classthe_king » Sep 26th, '10, 20:10

I didn't really read this as a rap song but as a poem and it was really good. Your best multis ever.

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Re: My soul has a pen...And it writes lyrics too..

by Rollimeo » Sep 26th, '10, 20:26

that was good :worship:

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Re: My soul has a pen...And it writes lyrics too..

by Solace » Sep 26th, '10, 20:47

J to the R-O-C wrote:First of allll .... THC

Second Of Allll ... very deeep

Third of allll ....... nice flow

4th of allll ............. THC!

Fucking faggot pussy.

Good piece, I agree with Class. Your best multies.

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Re: My soul has a pen...And it writes lyrics too..

by J Roc » Sep 26th, '10, 20:52

Solace wrote:
J to the R-O-C wrote:First of allll .... THC

Second Of Allll ... very deeep

Third of allll ....... nice flow

4th of allll ............. THC!

Fucking faggot pussy.

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Re: My soul has a pen...And it writes lyrics too..

by Ka0t1c » Sep 27th, '10, 18:43

i like the multies on this, it's something i enjoy a lot when i read lyrics, very cool stuff

oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too

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Re: My soul has a pen...And it writes lyrics too..

by Steve Spag » Sep 28th, '10, 20:02

Pretty good piece. Like Maybe said, the flow was great and I felt that was your strongest part on this. Lyrics were good but I think you overused your multi's a bit. People concentrate on that stuff too much but you can just as easily get a story/point across without them.

Good drop though, but I would like to see you do your own style other than someone else's, lol.

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Re: My soul has a pen...And it writes lyrics too..

by ilovebender.com » Sep 29th, '10, 02:46

LilSteve4Life wrote:A guess...
Relentless at best...Confession..A mess,
Depression..With Stress..Short sessions...
Im blessed......Bleeding to death..
Wreaking of sweat...Seeking.. the right of whats left,
Inspired to get...Off the downward spiral..It steps..
Through this mind of regrets..behind a face of defects..
Escaping the threats...Still trapped in a cage,
Happy...Enraged..The sky blackens today
Extracting the waste...It tears me apart,
Nothing left but the image....Of her etched on my heart,
Long stretch from the start...I built up the hope..
Now im feeling remote..Made friends with my ghost...
Were just happy to float...through this house that i broke..
(SIGHHH) I resorted to this...Never thought of the risks...
Lying dormant and still...Falling through the abyss.

That was sicc! :y:

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Re: My soul has a pen...And it writes lyrics too..

by Weather Man » Sep 29th, '10, 06:17

Dam that's crazy. This was pretty dope !

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