Ƨteven© wrote:BILI ur verse is the shit
Ƨteven© wrote:Steven-
A vast expanse, My desert boots are trapped in sand,
Map in hand, Fighting my way off of this earth,
Heres a quick health tip, Stay the fuck out my face,
Or i might go stealth quick,And warp speed your mind quicker than starships,
Seekin the answers of why we gotta indure the enforcing
Of endorsing the likes of Soulja Boy but divorce.
classthe_king wrote: Bili you've gotten a lot better even though you jacked the first line from Mc Anonymous
BILI wrote:classthe_king wrote: Bili you've gotten a lot better even though you jacked the first line from Mc Anonymous
Where?Are you jk or?I swear I never saw that line,but yes this was inspired by RA,my life is inspired by RA from now,wait till I get on news as a kill...wait what
jk
classthe_king wrote:BILI wrote:classthe_king wrote: Bili you've gotten a lot better even though you jacked the first line from Mc Anonymous
Where?Are you jk or?I swear I never saw that line,but yes this was inspired by RA,my life is inspired by RA from now,wait till I get on news as a kill...wait what
jk
Maybe he never posted it on here and he just showed it to me
Rain Matrix wrote:both had good drops... some good metaphors and some weak ones
spelling correction- Vein is an vessel that carries blood toward the heart, whereas Vain is having a high opinion of ones self or doing something for nothing
wasn't sure if you caught that... keep dropping
Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol
Yah-hah wrote:Was dope for both of you. Steven, the beginning was dope the imagery was really there. I didnt like the ending as much but it was overall alot better than the last joint I saw you in,
Its about time you start writing again BILI, still looks pretty sharp tho man good bars from both of yall
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