Like Yeah!

[MakaveliTheDon]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BJMqvT24FeE

Made a verse to Like Yeah's Beat. I'll finish it when I feel less lazy lol.

[Verse 1]
I see....nothing wrong with some fun,
As long...as it's done with a gu--un,
Bust shots, cuss lots, drugs, rocks, fuck stops,
That's why I leave all them cars and them bikes and them trucks popped,
Chaos, massacres, disasters and gat-blasters,
Gangsters, coming right at ya, wack pranksters,
I'm the rap master, so behave while on campus,
Or I'll be forced to out rap ya, trap ya, collapse ya, and order your casket,
Stepping to me is just like walking down the stairway to hell,
You'll just rot and burn in a cell as you constantly pray and yell,
So keep thinking these warnings are some bad jokes,
Me on crack-coke will slash throats, and bend some back bones,
A scheme to take me down is nothing but a plain shit plot,
Let it be known that if you hate me, you truly hate hip-hop,
So what's left?, (killing you) yeah that's right,
Oh and while you hang, squeal and spill as I kill and say my rap's tight!, (yo!)

[classthe_king]

This was kind of a hard beat to write too and I couldn't really catch up on the flow. Drop the whole gangster thing though and be more creative, I doubt you can back that up in real life. You had some dope rhymes sometimes and some weak rhymes other times, use multis all the time.

[MakaveliTheDon]

This was kind of a hard beat to write too and I couldn't really catch up on the flow. Drop the whole gangster thing though and be more creative, I doubt you can back that up in real life. You had some dope rhymes sometimes and some weak rhymes other times, use multis all the time.

It came off as gangsta? lol my bad I was try to just write random shit just like Tech did on the real song

Anyways thanks for the feed

[classthe_king]

As long...as it's done with a gu--un,
Bust shots, cuss lots, drugs, rocks, fuck stops,
gat-blasters,
Gangsters, coming right at ya,

[MakaveliTheDon]

As long...as it's done with a gu--un,
Bust shots, cuss lots, drugs, rocks, fuck stops,
gat-blasters,
Gangsters, coming right at ya,

Just cause it rhymed

[classthe_king]

That's why I said be more creative. But you deff got potential so keep working at it

[MakaveliTheDon]

Thanks man.

Next song will show my creativity to y'all